Scared? {guy needed semi advance}

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    Mavis was the toughest girl in school, she had a reputation, she was mean, heartless, cruel, and has no morals. People say she's the satans daughter which she sometimes agrees just to scare people which makes her smile. Her sense of humor isn't like everyone else's, she laughs or smiles from people's pain and suffering.


    Mavis has a wonderful voice, she can sing like there's no tomorrow, though no one knows that because she doesn't let people hear her sing. Though she does have friends mostly girls because they aren't really that scared of her like the guys are.


    Mavis has strong opinions which is why most people are scared of her she makes sure people know how she feels, she isn't around the bush about anything.


    Mavis walked down the campus side walk walking to the cafeteria to meet some friends. She held her books close to her as people moved out of her way when she walked by. She wore a black dressed with some laced stockings and some black small heels appropriate for college classes. She was in a pretty good mood, no one has bothered her, she went to class and she did a good amount of her homework all before three o'clock lunch. People were scared of her no matter what mood she was in though so it didn't really matter.


    Plot: okay so this is like jade and beck relationships, your character has to be accepting of her but not back down or be too mean like you character has to be similar but just not mean like her. Also I kind of want them to not like eachother at first other then that it's free range you just have to open her up. Semi advance please

    (k)


    Elkin was chatting to his friends in the lunch Hall. He was sitting on the table leaning back while some of his firends Sat down at the table and some standing. He didint pay attention to his surroundings

    Mavis walked over with four of her friends who were her best friends Into the cafeteria and smiled when she saw someone guys sitting at their table. "Mavis no don't start can't we just sit someplace else?" One of her friends, Lilly, who was the sweetest girl ever said softly. Normally she would listen to lilly because who could say no to her, but today she hadn't started a fight or really scared anyone so she was really in the mood to do it. She walked over to elkin and gave him and his friends a wicked smile, they would scatter just like everyone normally did. Her friends behind her and her hands on her lips,"this is our table," she said sternly her voice high and strong, demanding.

    "I dont see your name on it." Elkin looked at mavis. His friends had backed off slightly. They even looked at him in surprise. "Not your table unless your names on it." He smiled

    The cafeteria seemed to go silent and even her friends gasped. Mavis though didn't studder,"would you like to end up in front of a truck, beat it or I'll beat you," she snapped back at him her eyes narrowing annoyed with this guy now but also a bit curious

    Her eyes widen no one has challenged her in such a long time it made hr smile. She hand her books to one of her other friend Sammy who just giggled. "I hope you have good health insurance," sammy said glad to watch a fight. Mavis took a few steps closer to him glaring. Reaching into her back pocket she pulled out a switch blade, everyone knew she had it but no one really did anything about it

    Her eyes completely widen and people all around stood to watch completely surprised by this. This caught her off gaurd so much she dropped her switch blade to the ground. She stared up at him her mouth gapping open not sure what to say or do no one has ever done this

    I'm sorry but could you put some more detail into your writing, it's a semi advance so like three to five sentences or lines. Sorry :3


    She stared up at him trying to regain her thoughts before she shook her head and pushed him back away from him her face expression completely angry. "Touch me again and Youll end up six feet under," she growled pushing him harder to really get her point across

    (Srry i have bad thinking XD ill tyry harder.)



    "Still dont get it do you." He giggled a bit. He ignored the pushing. Eventually one of his friends broke them up. "Now stop it both of you." He looked at Mavis. "Hve you table. youv messed with him to much." He looked at elkin "And you have some damm gut my friend." They started dragging elkin away.

    She glared at him not looking at his friend who stopped them. She watched as he was dragged away,"next time I'll make sure you get it." She warned him picking up her knife and pointing it at his group of friends. "Keep him on a short leash cause I now know who's dog he is," she warned his group of friends. Threatening them too before sitting down and he friends sitting too.


    It's cool just reminding you