I need some tutoring~

Guess who~~~~~~

I understand ^~^ first lets start off with simple sht
Make a post ^^
To anything
Pretend like your starting off a thread
In the forest
Creatures and sht

Alright wait ^^

Alright so something you might want to try is describing the room. As to take up a paragrapgh, then in your second which will be what you just typed. Add some detail to it, even some of the smaller things, for example
Your post~
Emily hadn't been feeling well lately, she had felt random pains and the regular puking. The only thing that she could hong of is that she had gotten pregnant. Emily wasn't a slut or anything infact she only had sex once, with her boyfriend about half a month ago. Her stomach hadn't become swollen and she got her period yesterday so maybe she was safe, maybe. Bringing her had up to her neck she groaned, was this a usual thing? Having two small holes in her neck? She didn't think so. She began to stand up but fell back down. "Sh*t," she groaned, "mom, don't come up."

I'm at school right know, so I would have made it longer. Lately I've been trying to make longer posts

So i'll take it and mess with it some.

Clothes scattered all around a small room. By the door was a desk, and infront of the desk was a leather chair, and what may have been a foot from the bed lay a brown haired girl. Whose hair would come down to her back if it wasn't sprawled on the pillow. The lower half of her body under the covers while the chest and above was exposed. Not that she only slept with a bra and panties. Though it's not like you needed to know this, her hands that were once placed under her head drew out just as an alarm on the drawer beside her blared in her ear. She let out a groan and sat up in her bed, letting her feet dangle over the edge near the beige rug. And before long she stood to her feet.

Emily hadn't been feeling well lately, she had felt random pains from her stomach and her neck and the regular puking every now and then. The only thing that she could think of at that moment was that she had gotten pregnant. Now thinking about it urged the girl to drift her right hand up and trail the seams of her stomach. To think one day her stomach would bloat up. letting out a sigh of what was either lethargy, or the thought on monotony. Emily wasn't a slut or anything infact she only had sex once, with her boyfriend about half a month ago. Her stomach hadn't become swollen and she got her period yesterday so maybe she was safe, maybe. Bringing her hand that was once on her stomach up to her neck she groaned, was this a usual thing? Having two small holes in her neck? She didn't think so. She began to walk but at the first step her legs buckled from beneath her and she fell "Sh*t," she groaned,. And as the thud filled the room her mom had called if she was okay. "mom, don't come up!" She yelled over her shoulder, having no plans to get up after falling. She now lie there. After she was sick, every day seemed the same, weak, vomit, coughing, it sucked.

I'm at school right know, so I would have made it longer. Lately I've been trying to make longer posts

^_^ Alright so the thing is. Even though it's two paragraphs it has been extended. I've added a few other motions but ^_^

Anyway what I did was that. I took every small thing and dragged it out, don't be afraid to add unnecessary sentences. Because even it may seem worthless, it comes around sooner or later. Though! Don't make them completely useless sentences ^_^. Need an example?

Its not needed, but it adds some inner thought as to how the character still feels. With me I've found that its easier to post with fight scenes to its better to find what suits you that you can elaborate on. For example say your character had a dream ^_^

want an example?

One thing that helps is watching other advanced roleplayers and checking out their style, and then giving it a try ^_^