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    Plot:


    I giggled as I passed through the wall of the house,"finally free!"I cheered to myself levitating slightly above the ground as I jogged down the darkened street. I can't touch the ground now that I'm dead, but I can sure make it look like I was running normally, even if no one can see me. Looking around I try to decide which house to go to when I see a moving figure.

  • yup okay


    "LET GO!"she yelled as the mugger pulled hard at her phone that had a fancy new gold trimmed case. She stumbled backwards her grip on the phone slipping. great!!!

  • Hearing the struggle, I moved quickly towards the two just as the girl stumbled backwards. I immediately recognized the girl as Rachel, one of the rich men's daughters, the other person I wasn't so sure who it was, but looking at the two closely I figured out what was going on, the stranger was mugging her. I know ghosts don't usually get involved with human affairs, but even alive I could never stand by and watch a crime, which is actually what caused my death. If I were to help someone in the past I could just make it look like karma, but there was nothing I could use, so just risking it I grabbed a big rock and threw it at the man, hoping to hit him.

  • The rock, that scared Rachel half to death, hit the mugger in the side of the head. Shocked, he let go of the phone and ran, jumping over a fence, half falling as well. Rachel was breathing hard, watching the direction the mugger had went. She glanced down at the rock. It had a bit of blood on it. She looked around, green eyes frightened. who threw the rock? It doesn't just randomly start raining rocks.... Rachel spots a figure not to far away."Did you throw the rock?"She asked still out of breath.

  • I mentally cheered as I watched the guy run away, distracted by my little celebration in my head I jumped when I heard her voice. I was going to reply, but quickly realized she couldn't have been talking to me, I mean come on she can't see me....right? I looked around frantically for someone, anyone who she could have been talking to, but there was no one, still uncertain I raised my hand and pointed to myself with a confused look.

  • Rachel rubbed the back of her hand, it was throbbing."Yeah...you..."She replied watching him look around then point to himself."Did you throw the rock?"She questioned again.

  • I slowly and silently nodded, hoping so much she doesn't notice anything odd about, like how my feet were levitating above the ground slightly or that my body and eyes had a very faint glow. "I was just walking by and saw what was happening so I decided to help, I should go now," I said, turning away.

  • "But wait!"Rachel called running towards him."I have to repay you for-"She finally got his image."For..."She couldn't finish her sentence.Her eyes were going over his image."Um...for...um" She blinked.Stop staring you seem rude!!!. She snapped at herself but couldn't stop herself."For saving me..."She finished looking back up to his face

  • I froze as she told me to wait, but after a moment I could move again and I looked back at her. I would be lying if I said I didn't look her over as she walked over, but all thoughts disappeared as she talked, her gaze making me uncomfortable as she stumbled over her words,"er, it's okay, I'm fine, you don't need to repay me,"I said quickly, shifting nervously.

  • Rachel shook her head.it was rude to stare.maybe he has some super rare disease...that slowly makes you fade away...."Umm, are you sure...I mean I could get you something if you want."She said again, but at the same time she really no longer wanted to talk anymore for it was becoming beyond awkward.

  • I shook my head,"what use would I have of a hu-"I cut myself off before I could finish saying 'a human object,' but I did continue talking,"I probably wouldn't use anything you give me."

  • Rachel nodded."Um...okay...I guess I'll see you around..."She said begining to walk backwards. She stopped."Umm... I never did get your name..."