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  • [align=center][color=lightgreen]ALRIGHT SO


    This is the brain-birthing-baby-whatchamacallit thread for this new fanclan-type-thing.


    Basically I'm going to toss the half-written guide onto this page. Keep in mind that every single name you see is up for debate because... well... let's face it, I ain't the best namer. Just ask my OCs named Wallace and Hat.


    Now, when you think of The Cluster (that's the name I'll use until someone thinks of a better one) think more along the line of overly complicated Xenomorphs from the movie Alien (or, more preferably, Aliens).


    The Cluster
    We are the hive. We are the swarm.


    Though the sun burns above your weary head with an intensity known only to a place such as this desert, the ground beneath your feet remains eerily cool. An underground spring, perhaps? How typical of water to lie just beyond a creature’s parched grasp. You almost wish to rest your head against the cool earth, but are once again reminded not to by the vile dust the wind whips against your nostrils. This grey sand isn’t natural. It smells too much like a twoleg monster. AND GUESS WHO DIDN'T FINISH THE OPENING PARAGRAPH hurr hurr


    The Territory


    I don't exactly have a good description yet, but here's a doodle I did during a break at work--
    [img width=510 height=433]http://i61.tinypic.com/30rw7ck.jpg[/img]
    If you look closely you'll be able to see an BUTTWHOOPINFREAKINAWESOMEASHECK wreckage of a space shuttle. Yes. It's impaled and perched on two rocks that jut out of a wasteland. The two rocks were actually apart of a beautiful miniature canyon that was smashed to bits by the rocket's oxygen tank and a couple of fuel cells. Now, you see that pond that's underneath the shuttle? That's not a pond. That's oil mixed with the water that created that canyon. Yes. Oil. Toxic. Smelly. Oil. My plan for this headquarters is to have a bunch of dead vines and other irradiated pants to be covered in oil and practically wrapped around this thing, making it look even more like an Alien hive. Or something like that.


    No one really know what the territory looked like before the shuttle crashed, but ever since it was tainted by the engine runoff, leftover rocket fuel, pure oxygen, and other research chemicals, everything is basically just grey sand and buzzards. Anyone who cleans their fur using traditional methods or, even worse, drinking the water around the shuttle runs the risk of catching an illness commonly known as "Black Tongue". The only cure for black tongue is a little bit of yarrow and a lot a bit of luck. Cats who have had Black Tongue and survived are often left with their tongues stained an ugly greyish color. Fur loss in The Cluster is a common occurrence, but is usually smiled upon; after all, mother has no fur. Why should her children?


    Hierarchy


    Larvae
    This is the youngest position of the Cluster. Newly born kits are cared for by an assigned drone or drones until they become full warrior, not by their actual parent. This is to ensure that “Mother” is the only mother they will ever have. However, the parent does have the honor of choosing the drone that cares for their young. Once the Larvae are strong and smart enough to walk and talk, it is the drone’s duty to teach them the basics of surviving in the harsh hive territory, such as what not to drink or eat or swim in. Once a month, all Larvae over three moons are grouped together and presented to the Matriarch. This is the Larvae’s first initiation ceremony. Here they are given their first glimpse into the Hive Mind. The mother comes before the gathering of kits and gives them an exciting speech, and when she is done each kit is instructed to tell her their name. Once that is done, every Larvae goes back to their assigned den, now a Pupae.


    Pupae
    The closest clan term that can be associated with the pupae would be “apprentice”. Unfortunately, the definition of the two words are not the same at all. A pupae is not assigned to a single mentor. In fact, they are mass-trained, as the way of the hive mind cannot be taught to each and every lone kit. These mass training sessions are often held by a Consul, the Promatriarch, or even the Matriarch herself. Unlike a conventional clan apprentice, Pupae are not allowed to go to battle under any circumstance. If a Pupae is caught fighting, they will be demoted back to a Larvae for three more moons or until they grow mature enough to follow the rules set by their Mother. However, if the hive is attacked, the Pupae may freely join in the fight, provided they stay safe and follow instructions. On a rare occasion, a group of Elder Pupae may be selected to carry out a secret mission or accompany a warrior on a diplomacy mission or a patrol.


    Promatriarch
    To put it simply, the Promatriarch is the Matriarch’s right-paw man. Cat. Thing. They carry out any responsibility the leader has no time for. They can organize patrols, call meetings (it might be a good idea to bring the meeting-thing up with Mother beforehand), judge or condemn any crime done within the hive, and organize any flippin’ fun-oriented event they darn well please. They cannot carry out unapproved diplomatic missions to other clans, declare war, condemn a crime done by any cat not owned by the hive, and cannot declare themselves above the laws of the Cluster.


    Should the Matriarch die, it is the Promatriarch's sworn duty to protect and ascend above his or her brothers and sisters. Essentially, they become the new mother.



    Matriarch
    The hive queen is only referred to as “Matriarch” by other clans or when being formally introduced. In all other instances, the Cluster simply calls her “Mother”. It is deeply instilled into the Cluster that, while they may be spawned from the blood of another cat, their hive queen is their one and only mother and should be considered as such. Even captured kits must be influenced through the hive mind that “Mother” should be loved unconditionally, as she loves them equally without question. And, in her own demented way, she does.



    Clan Specifics


    Fighting Style
    Every clan has their own fighting style. Shadowclan hides within their namesakes, relying on ambush and underpawed tactics to keep their opponents guessing. Windclan relies on speed, using their rabbit-like agility to make quick strikes to wear their opponents down. Thunderclan is all about finesse and fighting in enclosed spaces, keeping their tails and bodies just out of reach as their adversaries struggle to keep their footing in the dangerous forest terrain. Riverclan are powerful yet skilled, using their enchanced swimming abilities to their upmost advantage. The Cluster does none of that.
    The only proper way to describe the way of the Hive is… well… a swarm. The Cluster rely upon their numbers and their group training in order to create an imposing sea of claws and fangs rather than just a plain army. Hivemind training hones the Cluster’s group fighting abilities to an almost unexplainable level, making the Hive more than capable of taking down huge opponents with little effort. However, opponents that are the same size as the members of the swarm stage a much larger threat. That is where the Cluster employs the "Kick it in the Nuts and Run" technique.


    Prey
    The Cluster's main prey is... wait for it...
    Buzzards.
    They ain't the prettiest of birds, but in a wasteland void of life, you take what you can get. Once again, the swarm technique is employed to hunt these flesh-eating birds. The most common hunting technique is the old "Drop to get the Drop", in which one cat will play dead while the rest ambush the buzzards that swoop down for a meal.

  • Goodness yes.


    You need to add a rank of drone, just noticed.


    I shall now make a fancy for the Cluster. Right now. Yes. I'm off now.

  • [align=center][color=lightgreen]*squeals*


    It's so pretty and you even finished the intro!


    We also have to figure out a rank for a Consul (which I'm guessing is just going to be a swarm leader during battle) and a warrior equivalent. I think I was going to call them a Marabunta at one point, but then I figured out that it was a dumb name that no one can spell.


    Drones are supposed to be slaves. Those who reject the mother are considered "Heathen Blooded" and are forced to do the Cluster's dirty work. I have this long term plot for the future where The Cluster tries to enslave a whole bunch of cats from a clan and forces them to dig a trench through the territory and divert a river with clean drinking water to their camp.


    While most cats find it dumb to let vengeful slaves raise their young, the life of a drone actually isn't all that bad. There are certain laws in place that make it illegal to hurt a drone without reason (such as the drone disobeying), and killing a drone without consent from the leader is a huge no-no. We need that labor force. Successfully raising three litters is one way to get you promoted to a normal warrior. Another way is proving yourself to one of the higher ups, as both the Promatriarch and Matriarch can promote drones. Even a few Consels, and by that I mean those who dwell within the safe harbor of the mother's patience, can promote a drone. If you're a drone and think you should be promoted, the first cat you speak with shouldn't be Mother; she hates drones.


    Unfortunately, it's not illegal to insult a drone and they often eat last. They cannot, under any circumstances, disobey an order from even a regular warrior. Doing so is a good way to get yourself smacked. Worst of all, the kit of a drone, regardless of its lineage, is considered a drone as well.

  • [align=center][color=lightgreen]Alright, I made a sort-of-kind-of header/banner/whatever we use it for--


    [img width=510 height=191]http://warriorcatsrpg.com/prof…1406474892.png?1406475842[/img]


    Since the name is still up for debate, I just put it in a crappy chiller font.
    And yes. This is your leader. I'll fully explain why half of her face looks like that later, 'cause there's actually a pretty good explanation for that and her slight lack of... Sane.


    This is pretty much going to be a temporary/alternate choice banner, as I want to make one with all the HPs on it. But It'll be the same size, so... Yeah.

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    Looking good so far! Of course, you'll need a history/backstory type thing, but other than that, it seems good so far! I like how you keep it sort of ambiguous whether or not the Matriarch truly loves her "children." I think it would be funny if during roleplay she forgot someone's name and they were like, "but I thought you loved me" and she would reply (in the insane sort of way that I know she would speak, based on what I know about her) "of course I love you, I just have a lot of children."


    I think there should be a sort of a semi-HP that is a spy or a kitnapper or something like that. But there needs to be a cool name for it. And speaking of names, maybe the warriors could be called Workers, since they're the bulk of the group and of course carry the weight of defending and feeding the clan, sorta like Worker Bees.[/fancypost]


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  • [align=center][color=lightgreen]Hm, I don't know... The name "Workers" sounds kind of demeaning (I really wish bees had cooler rank names, it would make this much easier). Calling the general cluster warriors Children would have the exact same problem.


    OOO OOO I like that Semi-HP, but lets add some stuff to what you just said!


    How about instead of just spying and kitnapping, why don't they lead spy missions and kit raids? That way there'll still be a large-ish number of participating members in each mission without us having an overloaded semi-HP rank. They can also be solely responsible for Water Runs, which I will explain right... wait for it... now--


    You know how The Hive's territory is pretty much toxic and uninhabitable yet the leader insists on staying on it? Well, the water is pretty toxic too. That's why some important cats have to go outside the territory, gather water into moss at another clan's river or something, pack the moss into the skull of a dead animal (or a coconut half I dunno) and carry the water back to the camp and store it in one of the empty oxygen canisters. Oxygen is pretty cold, so those things are made to keep the cold in.


    History... History... Um...


    I really can't think of anything. I do have a reason for the whole "mother" thing, though.


    Alright. I'm pretty sure that you guys have figured out that the leader is drop-dead UGLY. Not only is she a hairless cat, but half her body is deformed beyond repair. Well, that's because she has a type of skin cancer. Normally any animal would have died before the tumor grew half the size of hers, but your leader is one stubborn wad. She figured out pretty early on that she could drain the souls of near-death cats in order to preserve her own life, and does just that. Unfortunately, prolonging her life has allowed her tumor to spread over half her body, causing her right eye and half her mouth to be covered in infected skin and forever wracking her with a terrible burning sensation. Any normal cat would have been driven insane by that. She was not.


    What drove the leader to her teetering spot between the deep end and normalcy was the fact that she would never be able to bear children. Whether it was her illness or simply bad luck that left her barren, she will never be able to tell. But after seeing moons pass with no family to call her own, she was grief stricken and ever so alone. So she became a mother in her own right. But whether or not her "children" are truly objects of her affection or constant reminders of what she cannot have will forever remain a mystery.


    MWAHAHAHAHA


    Okay but seriously, we have to think of a history.


    I was thinking that since sooooooooo many Anti-clans have freedom of religion, we shouldn't (not that I'm against freedom of religion, because I think it's totally awesome). We're a pack of zealots under the command of the ever-loving mother, and all other gods belong to heathen-bloods and betrayers of the mother. (This is basically plot chow for a few good belief-and-doubt plots for new members and future traitors. We'll put a note under the statement in the guide to explain ourselves. We might have to do that for the "Drone is basically a slave" thing as well.) Let's say that the punishment for religious blasphemy is... Demotion to a Drone? I think that's fair since going all witch-burning on them just isn't that fun when there's a million other reasons to execute things.


    Oh yeah, we'll have to think of a judicial system.
    Maybe we can have two or four healers and they make up a council under the direction of the promatriarch or Matriarch. The council is supposed to have at least one cat on either side of the argument (in the event that there isn't one on either side, then you done fucked up and really deserve what's coming to you) and each will argue the accused's case. The promatriarch or matriarch will make the final decision. Keep in mind that these trials aren't usually held to find out who's guilty or who's innocent; it's more of a meeting to decide the accused's punishment. Let's face it; the mother's mind isn't one to be changed if you hurt one of her "babies". Pray you get the Promatriarch instead of her.


    Start suggesting awesome punishments, 'cause I'm making a list!


    From "misdemenor" to "capital" punishments--


    *Cleaning out the dirtplace and scrubbing the oil out of the dead starbeast's insides
    (Gonna call the shuttle "starbeast" 'cause it's cooler)


    *public humiliation


    *amputation of whiskers (they'll grow back in a couple of moons)


    *amputation of tail or tongue (they can usually choose. Usually.)


    *torture and/or demotion to drone


    *public torture and/or demotion to drone


    *exile


    *execution (slowly and creatively)


    *cut off their whiskers, throw them in the angry mob, and let them deal with it

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    Wow. I do not want to get on their bad side. I like the idea of leaders of raids and missions, and I think the kit raid leaders should have memory manipulation (you don't need to buy this if it's not maingame, correct?) to remove memories of parents, of course with permission from the owner. This could also be a punishment for raising their own kits, since what greater punishment is there than your own children not remembering who you are?
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  • [align=center][color=lightgreen]Well, I was actually kind of hoping that this clan would be in the main game. But memory manipulation isn't too terribly expensive and I never use my own FK for anything, so should the need arise I'll donate some FK to the head of the Semi-HPs so at least one of them will have that power. If they agree to even want that power, that is.


    Besides, The Cluster can employ some good old fashioned brainwashing techniques if all else fails. Young children, including young animals, are in a rather fragile state of mind when their younger, so tying them down and shoving their faces into water every time they ask about their parents is a good way to traumatize them to not even thinking about their parents. Drowning is one of the most horrible sensations to feel.

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    Ah, yes! That would work, too! Of course, I would be willing to donate FK as well.
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  • [align=center][color=lightgreen]Nah, let me cover it. I can easily earn more by reopening one of my old art shops anyways.


    That history thing is gonna bug me, though. Can you think of anything?

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    All right. Well, if you need it for like a contest or something, please ask! Also, consider a slot at your shop reserved!


    Hmmm... Maybe Mother herself has memory manipulation or knows the oldfashioned techniques, and she grew lonely, so she found the territory, decided to start a group, and found some kits and brainwashed them to think they were her kittens...?[/fancypost]


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  • aw thanks the fancy isn't done yet


    for history since it's a space shuttle... humans come to the planet they die or are killed, primitive life forms develop and inhabit the place. maybe?

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    Hm... yeah, and we can gather a small group of pre-joined cats to make up the teeny population of the newly made Cluster.


    @Hyper


    Um... What? They're still on Earth and stuff (the staff would have our butts on a platter if we weren't) if what you mean is that they're on a different planet. But your head is definitely in the right place-- dead humans and primitive lifeforms are a go.

  • [align=center][color=lightgreen]SUCH FABULOUS


    We can rewrite the descriptions of some of those descriptions once we decide what to call everything and other specifics.
    ('Cause dude, that Drone description is so long it looks awkward and that's my fault)
    But I like what you did with some of the other descriptions
    (YAAAAAAY THEY MAKE SENSE NOW)


    SO


    We need to drum up a name for a normal warrior and a name for a more-than-normal warrior/spy/swarm leader/kitraid leader/head water gatherer/awesome person. And maybe rename a few of the other positions because "Larva" and "Pupae" sounds a little weird. Normally I'd use the Latin rootwords of anything I wanted to make sound cooler, but those are Latin words. They might be fine... Unless you guys have something better.


    I vote we keep the normal warrior name. Like, we just call them "warriors" since that's what they do in both bee hives and with Xenomorphs in the Alien franchise. There's really no reason to change it, I guess. Guards to the Queen from the Alien Videogames (and a few movies) are called Praetorians (name derived from Roman Praetors). I don't want to exactly copy the names from Alien, but we need something that screams badass like that.


    OOO OOO we could also classify our warriors. Classifying them wouldn't really mean anything rank-wise, but it could be a fun part of the "Larva assessment". A group of cats (probably the Medics or more-than-warriors) give each Larva a preliminary visual assessment, a physical assessment, and a quick mental assessment during their initiation ceremony. They then separate them into one of two classes; one focused on strength, the other speed. Depending on what class you're in will affect the first group training session you attend and yadda yadda yadda hone certain skills yadda yadda tactic stuff. Or that idea may be waaaay too complex and should be dropped altogether.


    OMG AND WHAT ABOUT THE PREGGER KITTIES
    THAT WOULDN'T LOOK TOO WELL ON THE MOTHER
    So let's call them Hosts and say that they had the honor of being imbued with the mother's children, for the mother is much too busy to carry them herself. It is just as forbidden for a Host to fight as a Pupae is, and if anyone catches a Host fighting, she'll be demoted to a Pupae. Boom. Problem solved, new position introduced.

  • OH YEAH


    BOOM


    DONE WITH THAT CHEESE FO SHIZZLE


    haha what if we call the warriors 'swarmers' or somethin? yeah idk warriors just seems a little dull beside 'promatriarch'


  • oh wait how bout the hosts have to be isolated until they have them babies, so the cats aren't like 'wtf why are you preggo' and stuff?

  • [align=center][color=lightgreen]Hm... I don't know. I mean, I can't really think of anything fancy enough to go alongside terms like Matriarch and Promatriarch. BUT BUT BUT speaking of fancy names THAT MORE-THAN-WARRIOR rank can be called...


    Wait for it...


    Viziers.
    Vizier is an Arabic/Muslim term, which doesn't really go with Promatriarch or Larva or Pupae, but before you say no, say it out loud. Say it. It feels good, no?


    But if you don't think it really goes, we can think of something else.


    ~~


    OH MA GAWSH


    WE COULD KEEP THE HOSTS IN THE CENTER OF THE HIVE WHERE THOSE OIL-SOAKED VINES ARE PRETTY MUCH EVERYWHERE AND WE COULD MAKE THEM HAMMOCKS OR NESTS OUT OF THE VINES SO I'D LOOK LIKE AN ACTUAL BEE HIVE WHERE ALL THE LARVA ARE STUFFED INTO THE WALLS AND STUFF


    *coughs*


    What I mean to say is that when we isolate the Hosts, we put them towards the back of the shuttle and into the storage area. Most of the grimy vines that cover the shuttle are stored and grown there and sometimes just draped over the walls in order to keep the area cooler than usual. Inside the storage area there is a large amount of cubby-holes and those weird square gym lockers. This creates an extremely creepy beehive-like area. The hosts get to choose a place to reside in until their kits are born. Once birthed, the kits are to be named and taken away immediately. No paternal interactions are allowed, and if the Host resists the Viziers will be ordered to make it to where she'll never be able to have kits again. If the resistance continues, the objects that inspired such disobedience will be removed from the Cluster. Permanently.


    The kits will be cared for by a trusted Drone of the parents' choice. One of the Drone's toes will be cut off for every kit that dies or goes missing while in his or her care, so make sure those kits are healthy and happy at all times. The Viziers will check the kits every two weeks to ensure that none have gone missing, died, or are in bad health. If more than two kits die or the Viziers feel that the lives of the kits are in danger, the Drone will be quickly dispatched and replaced by another of the Mother's choosing.

  • [fancypost bgcolor= opacity: 0.5; borderwidth=0px;][font=georgia][color=white]sorry I'm late guys ;-; did I miss anything important? I read the whole first post but I'm too lazy to read the rest.