mary sue/ hp help please

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    i ave this character who i supose i sorta mary - sue, and i'm very scared about that so i amde her pick some fights and she got hers econd warning because of behaviour problems.


    i'm confused on what to do + might be overreacting but she means so much to me and i want her to stay a spartan please help

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    Just don't make her Mary sue, like you can make her hard by buying her bodies an powers n tuff but don't always dodge attacks and stuff like that idk

    she's really happya dn bubblya nd gr8a nd stuff and she's also a perv and has a bad humor. peopel say she is a sorta mary sue for her age, bc she's 1 month. i haven't sparred or battle with her yet.


    i'm really scared lmfao elp

    [fancypost bgcolor=; bordercolor=transparent; width: 350px][justify][size=8]A mary-sue is a character without flaws, not neccessarily rude to everyone but like your average character.


    For example, my cat Shireharvest is really helpful, but finds it hard to say no and often embarrasses himself and is pretty shy.


    So, for your character - what is good about her? List those traits, and then select some bad traits (they can be conflicting, for example very opinionated but scared to voice those opinions). I often use THIS site because it lists positive, neutral and negative traits. :)


    EDIT: you say your character is one month. When she's older the mary-sueness probably won't be a probably, provided she is realistic, i.e has her own struggles and weaknesses. Kits are normally innocent about the world- that might help.

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    [size=8]Well, picking and starting fights, even if it is a plot, still leads to ic consequences. You should focus on developing her more through life experiences, the people she meets, how does she act around others? All those can contribute to molding a personality. For example, since a lot of characters swear in BloodClan, maybe she'll pick it up as a habit as well due to her environment. If you only focus on keeping her position as Spartan, you'll be too worried on making her nice then actually developing her as a whole.

    [sup]mayb If they're talking about her age u can make her like 1 moon bodily but like older spiritually so that she has knowledge and stuff and it seem realistic


    I just always do that or maybe should h as an older body that she uses to fight?


    //sorry for bad grammar I'm on mobile xD

    she has a lot of development i think likE?? IDek she did have an older body but fighting isn't teh problem lmao


    i actually maek her pretty jokingy mean and pervy sos he's not always nice??

    [fancypost borderwidth=0; text-align: justify; width: 425px; font-size: 8pt;]Keep in mind that one month olds are basically toddlers in real life; she wouldn't know a lot of inappropriate stuff like that, if she's both bodily and spiritually young.


    Also, I looked through your posts, and you brought a lot of OOC stuff into that thread; as Gill said, activity doesn't matter as long as you're helpful and give good ideas. Plus, your character seems to be really rude, so you can't expect her to be treated without punishments /w/

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    [fancypost borderwidth=0; text-align: justify; width: 425px; font-size: 8pt;]What I mean is, Jinx wouldn't know about open threads and whatnot.

    yeeh i get that
    but a lot of people use OOC stuff in their posts


    ' my roleplayer won't be on for a while,'



    wait thsoe are diffrent thinsg.. yeh
    i get it sorry <3 uvu