(the main plot of this thread: Dawn is a Burnt golden she-cat with blue eyes who was from an evil group of cats but did not like the evil ways. so she escaped and had been wandering around for at least a week when she is found helpless by 2 Thunderclan Cats)
Dawn had been walking around for what felt like moons. Her fur was dirty and matted, her paws hurt and couldnt find any prey. "Maybe im just going to die out here" Dawn said to herself. "there isnt a sign of anyone anywhere and I'm starving. i cant make it much further" thats when she caught a strange scent. it wasnt a prey scent but how could she know if it was a cat. she walked a few steps further and fell to the ground. even her own paws couldnt hold her up anymore. she heard Voices and saw shadows but those were blurry. She just went limp, helpless and slowly slipped out of consciousness.