RP thread for scorch pack!

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    Duke watched his pack proudly from his perch on the piney cliff. the sun was setting and casting beautiful golden beams everywhere and shadows from the trees made dapples on the ground. he smiled to himself sniffing the air, time to hunt. "it is time we must hunt! all dogs able come with me!" he barked loudly. he bounded swiftly down from his grey rocky perch and on to the shady ground heading towards the entrance of the camp.

    duke watched as oxford struggled to get to the outside were he would hunt. "little one, you cannot hunt yet, wait until your older. we can't tire out a fine hunter like you tell your ready" he said in a amused voice. "do you want to guard the elders den? i'm sure they would need your protection"he barked happily proud of how much the pup wanted to contribute.

    The pup would be ready for apprenticeship soon duke mused smiling at oxfords enthusiasm. "let's go" he said turning to his hunters. they nodded and together they jumped down the rocky cliff towards the field below. speaking of big bad humans, i need to rid our territory of those annoying creatures! he thought angrily.

    the elders chuckled as Oxford viciously tore apart a leaf who was guilty of 'Falling on an elder's head and trying to suck their brains out'. "Not today, Zombie Leaf!!!!!" He chomped down on the leaf stem.
    Oxford heard a real crackle of leafs. In the woods he saw a flash of Hunters orange coat. "Elders! Scoot over for the Nursery pups and mothers!" Oxford rushed the Nursery dogs to the elder's huge Den. "Stay here don't go anywhere!" Oxford ran hard and found his leader. "Duke! I saw a human! I've moved the nursery pups and mothers to the elder's den along with the Healers!" Oxford reported.

    that quickly caught dukes attention. "good thinking oxford, thank you for alerting me, lets go" he said picking up the puppy and plopping him on the large dogs back. "hold on tight!" he barked as he and the hunters raced towards the camp. i hope no ones hurt... he thought angrily.

    duke peered around in the camp his fur raised in anger. suddenly he saw a flash of orange as the hunter prepared to shoot.....at oxford. he roared in rage and quickly dashed forward towards the hunter and pounced harshly on him. the human yelped as this massive dog slammed him into the ground. duke speed towards the hunters neck his huge jaws about to close in when..[glow=red,2,300]BAM!![/glow] a loud gunshot and duke felt a stab of agony at his side. he fell to the ground his blood pooling around him as claws of pain raked him.

    "DUKE!" Oxford howled. Oxford felt something snap inside him. The blood roared in his ears. His paws prickled. Oxford ran at the toppled over hunter. The hunter wouldn't expect this from a pup.
    CRUNCH!
    The hunter was dead.
    Oxford ran towards Duke. It was all his fault that Duke got shot. He began to cry. He nudged Duke. "Duke?" He whimpered.

    duke watched weakly as oxford killed the human. the puppy ran towards him worriedly. "shh, shh its OK. all be fine. good job oxford." he got up slowly and painfully walking towards his den. "get someone who knows -erc- healing" he barked in agony. he felt heavy and slow and very sleepy. but he knew he couldn't sleep.

    duke watched as oxford came to him with the healer. he smiled at the pup. "its OK go back to your mother" he said weakly.


    the healer nudged oxford out. "do what he says, i need complete concentration."she said licking the puppy before rushing back into the den.

    occ: one hour later....


    the healer came out of the den and slowly went up to the talking cliff. "i have a announcement to make...duke will live, however he will need to rest for a long time and we need someone to take over as leader while he is healing." she barked looking around the camp.

    Mink:Mink sighed in relief as she heard the announcement. feeling less dizzy and sick and looked around.


    Max: wagging his tail at his sister in happiness that there leader was alright breathing a sigh of relief.


    Toby: Toby looked out of camp and wondered who would take over .

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    Mink:Perking up her ears mink walked out of camp for the hunt. waiting for toby and max an amused look ran across her face at max's serious face.


    Max: wagging his tail at his sister and looked and toby who was growling at a shadow. "toby you dork get over here" he barked.


    Toby: Toby looked at the shadow and at his brother and sighed there was something about shadows that bugged him.


    why are you characters not reacting to their leaders near death?