Lost Angel, Creepypasta [open to read and comment]

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    I look out my window, it was raining and it was a pretty dull night. I could hear my mother and my step father fighting and then I heard a crash. My head turned towards my door and I walked downstairs. I saw him on the ground. My brother and my mother was sitting next to him yelling at my step-dad. I held my hands over my ears and ran back upstairs to my room. I would sleep early tonight. I closed my eyes and drifted into a restless sleep. I slipped into a dark world. I could hear a little girl laughing behind me and I saw a glimpse of a little blonde girl running in the woods barefoot. "Wait!" I yelled after her. I ran into the woods in attempt to find her. I heard her laugh again and then I heard the whispering of her telling me something. The voice was blurred, but I knew... I knew she was trying to tell me something. I stood there for a moment, my mind a huge mess trying to figure out what that girl wanted. I felt like something was watching me and I closed my eyes tightly as I walked slowly forward. As I moved, I could hear more laughter... then I was abruptly awoken by my step-dad. My heart pounded as I got dressed for school. I hoped I wouldn't have that dream again tonight... If I did... I-I don't know what I would do... I walked into school, where my best friend, Nathan, met up with me. He looked almost like me! Black bags under our eyes, Terrified looks on our faces... Was it the photo? Then discussion of Angel Fallon started on the news. I watched as it told info on her. "A girl with blonde hair and bright blue eyes, went missing last night at about 7:00 east time. Her parents say her name is Angel Fallon and she was playing in the yard before she went missing. If you find her...." And so on. I looked at the picture and I saw it differently then others... She had a twisted smile, her hair was a mess, and her eyes were black. I went to bed early again that night and the same dream occurred. I saw her and I ran after her. "Hey! Angel! Why are you running!?" I screamed before she disappeared into the darkness. I was starting to feel the same feeling again... The dread of someone watching me... I turned around to see a teddy bear with a stitched smile on its face and red eyes. I fell backwards and closed my eyes tightly wishing this dream would end. Before I woke, I could hear her whisper.. "Help Me. Lead me Home..." I looked at my clock on my nightstand. I let out a sigh. It was the middle of the night and I knew nobody was awake. I walked downstairs quietly, where at the bottom, I saw her, Angel. She was waiting for me with an innocent smile and a knife in her hands. "Help me. Lead me home." She whispered before I was on the ground barely able to breathe. I closed my eyes and slid into the world of Madness again. "I'll Help you, Angel... I'll lead you home..." I say once I see her again...


    I watched her quietly when she said once again...



    "Help Me. Lead Me Home..."

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    Lost Angel
    "Close Your Eyes..."


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    I look outdoors, it was raining and clouds covered the dull night sky. I could hear yelling and hollering downstairs and decided to check it out. I shouldn't have. I could see my Mother yelling at my brother and my dog standing behind him growling. I looked towards where my dog was growling and screamed. I ducked behind the cover of the wall and ran upstairs with my eyes closed. I heard my mother scream before I slammed my door. I ran over to my bed and buried my head into my pillow before slipping into sleep. I woke the next morning and left for school through the back door. In case the murderer was still there for some reason. On my way to school, I noticed something on the ground and picked it up. Obviously. It was a girl? A blonde curly haired, blue eyed, 6 year old girl... I put the image into my bag and finished walking to school. When I got home that evening, I noticed some children at my door. Holograms? No. They looked real... but when they looked at me, I almost fell backwards. They had black eyes! Black! I blinked a few times in horror and they were gone. Just like that! I ran inside and ran to my room. I plopped onto my bed exhausted and fell asleep again. My sleep was restless... I went into a dark... wooded forest... where I heard-- laughter? A little girls... laughter? Then I saw her. That blonde haired girl running, barefoot into the forest. "Wait!" I scream after her. In attempt to find her, I walked aimlessly deeper into the forest where I could hear the continuous whispering of her trying to tell me something. I turned around feeling something was watching me... I ran forwards, tears streaming down my face and my eyes, bloodshot. I swear... If--If I found something... watching me... I would seriously go INSANE! My heart raced and my hands were shaking. I heard Her say one thing before I turned around and saw it. The teddy Bear. It had a terrible, twisted, stitched mouth, it's fur was ripped in some places, it's eyes were a deep... dark... insane-looking... red eyes. I screamed and fell backwards in fright. My eyes opened in reality with a frightening cry. I shot my bloodshot eyes towards my nightstand and the alarm clock on top of it. I closed my eyes for a moment. It was midnight. Wait... that girl looked like my photo I'd picked up! I open my eyes again and I got out of bed for a midnight snack. I walked tiredly down the stairs then I stopped half-step. Something wasn't right... The air was different... It felt like the air was being sucked right out of the room. I ran down the rest of the steps and saw her. The girl in the photo... The only difference... She had a knife in her hand and she was barefoot. Mumbling something, she stepped forward, making me step back in fear. Me, scared of a 6 year old? You must be like 'You've got to be kidding me? Seriously?' I'm serious... I looked at her once more and then I was being strangled by her small but strong arms. I gasped for breath... Even more... She let me go with a giggle and I was on the ground trying to fill my lungs with oxygen. Before I was sliced in the throat with the knife, I heard her say in a low, quiet, kid-like voice...


    "Close Your Eyes...."


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