Ninjago (Feedback appreciated!)

*smoke* I HAVE BEEN SUMMONED!!! XD ooh continue? Okay! I'll work on it! I just had a lot of test and studies! Don't worry! Next part will be out either late tonight or tomorrow!

Omg rereading my story and this stuck out XD

MusicNinjaz wrote:

[size=8]"Anyways, it could be fun with him having amnesia..." Jay said, picking up a shuriken. "This is a cookie."

Lloyd looked at him and at the shuriken. "I might have amnesia, but I'm not an idiot," Lloyd said dully.

UMG i finished reading and I'm like "I WANT MORE" the. I realize... Oh... I have to MAKE more XD I'm on that now!

Alright back to the writing! A little rusty but I'll catch on soon!! Here is half of a chapter because it's really late here.

The ninja had all eventually reached home at dusk, exhausted. Mostly all of the ninja were worried because Jay and Zeke kept asking questions for Lee. They were worried that Lee might turn out to become of them and they knew that they did NOT need three. However Lee answered politely and quietly. It was obvious that he was a quiet type and intelligent like Zane.

They all reached the dojo fast. The Senseis came out to greet them and check to see if they were alright.

Cole went in his room for something for his headache that was still bothering him. Jay offered to go with him.

"You'll make it worse," Cole said.

"No, I can humor it away! Why did the chicken cross the road?!" Jay replied. Cole started at him blankly and left, his hand on his head - obviously not amused.

They all split into doing their own things again.

Sadie walked to one of the most quiet and peaceful places in the dojo, the koi pond. She hasn't been there in a while since things have usually been hectic. She only came her when she was depressed or thinking - it was both this time.

Shana noticed her and walked over. Fireflies were flying around.

Sadie poked a hand into the water and tried to pet a koi but they swam away. She began to cry.

Shana out her hand on Sadie's shoulder and sat down next to her.

"What's the matter?" Shana asked, concerned.

"A lot of things... Maybe you can help since you are the good side of love," Sadie replied. She fidgeted with her mask. She sighed. "Lucia hit me with an arrow for both Lloyd and Kai but I don't know which to pick... It's like choosing which is more annoying: Jay or Zeke!"

Shana took a deep breath. "You are at love crossroads, huh? I know it's hard but we'll get through it. There are pros and cons about both of them. If you are with Lloyd, you could distract him and that wouldn't be good because he is the golden ninja. If you were with Kai - well, element conflict: rain and fire."

Sadie sighed and tried to pet the koi again but it swam further away. No... Come back. Don't leave me alone...

"That wasn't the answer you were hoping for huh? Or... Is there something else in mind? You can tell me, I'm here for you," Shana said. She reached and pet a koi. Sadie watched and grew sadder.

"Y-you guys won't leave me r-right?" Sadie said, her voice cracking. Eventually tears fell. She didn't wipe the, but she let them fall, onto the soft grass. Shana sat there, stunned that Sadie even thought of that.

"What gave you that idea?" Shana replied.

"It's just that ever since I was a little girl, I've had abandonment problems. Since my mom, my father, and Cole separated from me... I've been getting better but the incident with Lucia... What if they leave me again? What if you guys leave me again? What if I'm forgotten? If I disappear? If-"

"Stop with the ifs. Look we aren't going to abandon you, trust me. I-"

She got cut off because a certain black ninja came over.

"Hey I heard voices and- oh," Cole said, noticing Sadie. He has never seen her cry before.

"What happened?" Cole asked. Shana filled him in quickly. Cole walked over and put a hand on Sadie's head.

"Is that what you're worried about, sis?" Cole asked, a little laughter to his tone. "I will never leave you again. Same with everyone else. Just ask them. We are a family and we stick together no matter how messed up of a family we may be."

Cole wiped her tears with his sleeve. "No more tears about this alright?"

Sadie nodded. She looked at Shana with gratitude in her eyes. Sadie got to get feet and hugged Shana. "Thank you, " Sadie said. Cole joined in on the hug and it became a group hug.

No more tears were shed that night and if so, they were tears of happiness.

[Also tears of shame when Jay beat Zeke at a video game 12,674 to 12,675]

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Out of Character:

I'll work on chapter 14!! I've been busy with school and tonight had a lot of drama.....

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In Character:

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Oh haha here's the best part!! I comfort her all that night and guess what happens the next day I see her? I go up to her, tap her in the shoulder and I felt like she didn't even acknowledge my presence ! As if a ghost tapped her shoulder! She basically ignored me The entire day! Only time she talked to me was indirectly and it was debating octopuses or octopi.

I mean... What the [insert angry word here]?!!