Revenge of the Broken (Eragon Alternate Universe)[Now Private]

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  • Uluthrek glared at Renon"I don't like this guy"she murmured to Eternal Feather"Normally,I would reprimand you Uluthrek,but this time I agree with you.I really don't like this guy"said Eternal Feather

  • "I believe that at the moment you should be more concerned you you own safety than mine." Alaryan warned. "Because i believe that we are about to under attack." Her hand rested on her sword hilt, she stood perfectly still waiting hoarding motion.

  • Eternal Feather stepped out"Attack?Why would you fear attack from myself?"she said very cunningly"I pose no threat on my own,but with an ally of mine.."Uluthrek stepped into the light"You.Human.Say Name"said Uluthrek

  • Renon was oblivious to the potential ambushers, "Us?" The Scout laughed and poked the firewood around sluggishly, "Good King Galbatorix has kept the Varden and the Surdans in check since...Well, forever." The brown haired boy glanced warily at her blade, "Best put that away, we Dras-Leonans are quite hospitable." he continued to laugh at her until the elf and beast thing stepped into his firelight, he fell off of his log and fumbled his blade out as he stood to his feet, "What is that?!"

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  • Alaryan touched the first two fingers to her lips in the elvish sign of greeting and spoke a single word "Eitha."


    OOC: Eitha means go or leave this place in the Ancient Language.

  • Whatever gibberish that came out of the woman's mouth was lost on the human, but instead, he threw his sword at the Urgals' feet to sign his surrender. Renon fell to his knees before the hulking giant, "I yield! My name is Renon! Please, have mercy!"

  • Alaryan didn't even blink when Renon surrendered, she kept her eyes on the other elf waiting.

  • Eternal feather took the message"Uluthrek,It's time to leave.You were a little..extreme".She and Uluthrek made the sgin of greeting and left


    OOC:I know,and captain,Uluthrek is like 10 feet tall,so I really don't blame you for being scared

  • Renon signed his relief once the duo was gone, he was pale and frightened. "An elf and a demon. That's what they were, right? How did you send them away?!" The scout inquired shakily, proudly retrieving his surrendered sword, "Gods, I was sure I was to die then and there!"

  • Alaryan smiled and said "That was no demon that was a kull. Which is most definently not a demon, a kull is a urgal. Do pray that you will never meet a creature that can truly be called a demon."


    She turned to look at him and asked "You've never faced an opponent that wasn't a human or a wild animal have you?"


    Alaryan reach out to the other elf's mind and said "We need to talk."

  • Since the woman's hood was still draped over her head, he didn't notice that he speaking to an elf, but Renons' eyes widened at the sudden realization, "I-I have to inform the General!" He said, a wide grin spreading across his face, "Those mythical savages are back, and we can get the best of them again!" the scout whooped, never feeling as giddy as he did then, he turned to return the glance, "Come on! You can attest to it! We met a barbaric long-eared elf!" Renon laughed loudly as he went to douse the fire.

  • Renon brushed off the insult like he would a fly, his crimson cloak swaying untamed behind his back, "I can be a hero! Oh but to imagine, we must make haste!" He fantasized the possibilities, finally being able to please his father, "They won't see it coming! We could burn their fabled magical woods to the ground now that we know!"

  • Alaryan smacked him on the back of the head "Humans have never bested the elves nor are the elves barbaric creatures. What makes you think you can?"

  • The strike had only serves to make him grin wider, he stuffed a lumpy sleeping bag into his shoulderpack, "You forget the Great War a century ago! Where we 'humans' crushed those wretched savages. Rebels, all of them." He laughed as be finished packing up, "Being a human yourself, why're you so prickly 'bout it?" Renon inquired, hefting the bag onto his back.

  • "Wyrdfell." Alaryan hissed as he shouldered his pack.
    "You were taught lies, it was the Galbatorix and the rest of the Forsworn were the rebels who and forced the elves and the dwarves to the north and east and killed the human king Palencar. It was the Forsworn who killed destroy the Order of Riders!" said Alaryan

  • Now that was something new, no one he knew acknowledged history quite like this woman, he turned to frown at her, "My apologies, ma'am, but I'm not going to argue over dead people with you." He replied, ruffling a hand through his shaggy brown hair, "You should accompany me, and we can both get the credit for this discovery."

  • "Do you seriously think this forest is Du Weldervarden?" Alaryan asked him. Shifting her grip on her sword which caused the edge of the blade to glint dangerously. The stormy blue gray brightsteel looked unnatural in the daylight. The black mark on the blade reflected no light, in fact it seamed to absorbe all the light that hit it.
    "If you do you are far more of an idiot than i thought" There was not even a hint of humor his her voice it was deadly and cold.