We will Rise (OOC; Metroid Nation RP)

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  • So, a lot of you may be wondering just what a nation RP is to start with. Picture a Warriors RP. Now, allow only one player to control a single Clan in its entirety, and put in the rest of the Clans. That's an NRP. You control an entire faction and manage the politics, diplomacy, economy, resources, military, etc. of that nation. It takes more attention, but that challenge is what makes it fun in my opinion.


    Those of you who don't know Metroid all that well, don't worry. Here's all you need to know about it.


    The Galactic Federation is the biggest power in the galaxy, and is composed of the humans, who hail from the planet Earth. They do support and protect budding civilizations and encourage growth, but they have a bit of a micromanagement problem and like to be in control of everything. Out of the two remaining big nations, they have the most advanced technology and will always advance a project far faster than their counterparts, the Space Pirates of Zebes. I don't know who their leader is, but they're very easy to ally and get along with.


    The Space Pirates are the most hated power in the galaxy, as well as the only one that can pose a threat to the Galactic Federation out of all the factions (this isn't including Dark Samus, who may not be appearing here). They are comprised of the Zebesians, hailing from the planet Zebes. They are constantly experimenting with dangerous creatures and substances in an effort to conquer the galaxy. They are led by a resurrected Mother Brain, a biological supercomputer created in an effort to control the metroids. This nation is a bit more difficult to get along with, but make for a very powerful ally.


    The third and final big nation isn't actually here anymore, so to speak. They are the Chozo hailing from an unknown planet. They are an ancient civilization, predating humanity's entry to the galactic level and possibly even humanity itself. Through insight and philosophy, they attained enlightenment, allowing them to achieve great works of technology. They engineered an entire species, the metroids (however, they regret this creation), and perfected all forms of biotechnology. However, nobody will ever meet the Chozo anymore, as they have all ascended beyond physical existence. Individual Chozo found unworthy of ascension may be met, but most have cast aside their bodies. Traces of their civilization can be found on almost every world, though the ruins are often fresh because the ascension was less than 50 years ago.


    There are two secondary nations that may possibly be encountered, which are the Luminoth and the Ing. They reside on a world torn in two at the dimensional level, with Aether holding the Luminoth, and Dark Aether holding the Ing. The Luminoth are not very different from the Chozo, and are very wise and extremely advanced. The Ing are a tribal faction hailing from Dark Aether, who have little need of technology due to being able to possess more advanced species and using their tech. The Ing and the Luminoth are both engaged in a devastating war, mostly on the Luminoth's side. The Ing are decimating the Luminoth, to the point where the Luminoth are willing to accept all the help they can get. They will be easy to ally with.


    Now for the rules.
    1. Not every WCRPG rule applies here. I'll list my own rules for this RP.
    2. Cursing is fine, but don't overdo it. I'll leave it up to your own judgement.
    3. Don't godmod. Just don't. It's no fun for other people when you do this.
    4. I am very lenient about auto-hits. My policy on powerplay is that, as long as the attack wouldn't instantly incapacitate them or do too much damage, autohitting is fine. There really won't be that many important characters aside from national leaders, though, so this shouldn't be an issue.
    5. Do not claim any of the canon nations. You can make a nation composed of canon species, such as another Zebesian nation, but do not claim a canon nation.
    6. Use common sense.
    7. Have fun!


    I'll not be making a custom nation because I'm going to be playing the GF, Space Pirates, Luminoth, and Ing. I'll also do any NPC stuff that's needed so you guys can focus on running a nation. I will do sheets for these four in addition to a sheet for the Chozo.





    If you feel like something is missing from these sheet templates, feel free to bring it up. Chances are I might have forgotten something. I certainly feel like I am. I'll get my five sheets put up soon. I have a lot of writing to do for them. Ugh.

  • Name: Sherman


    Age:22


    Gender:male


    Species: smart Peabody


    Nation: learnatarius


    Position:leader


    Other:hi


    Species: smarticus peabodyieus (smart Peabody)


    Lifespan: up to 100 years if they have a mate 50 without one


    Physiology: (this includes special abilities stemming from just being this race, for those that don't know) they all seem to possess a high level intellect(for those literate in dc knowedge 15th level intellect and consider themselves the smartest beings in the universe though they arent


    Anatomy: (Anything not noted as being different from humans will be assumed to be the same as humans) they all have dog forms that are exactly the same however each persons dog forms bowtie is a different color and the bowtie is something that cannot be removed also their are no females in this species so males have a gland that produces a scent during mating season that attracts other males and they have a egg laying sack which produces an egg then holds the child every smart peabodys first child is laid as an egg the others aren't but you can have them laid that way if a smart Peabody has a child by a human the mother will only lay an egg


    Appearance: (Same thing with anatomy applies, so you only have to include the differences from humans) they have dog forms with aforementioned bowtie and their human forms all look exactly the same with red hair that sticks up naturally and they all wear glasses


    History: (This includes evolutionary ancestry, if you're feeling like doing it, but mostly include a brief recount of their history as a sentient species) smart Peabody's stem from a long forgotten race of dogs who had grown rather smart and out grew their natural dog forms having no need for them they developed human forms and learned to shift between such forms at will eventually when earth was deemed by them unfit they went into space once they did they found a barren planet in which they cultivated and their additions such as no females(once they landed all the females in the pack turned male) and d the ingrown bowties and everyone looking the same came about due to the planets naturally occurring atmosphere.


    Culture: (food, normal activities, etc.) as they are rather smart they enjoy making things , scine history(that's their favorite subject) art music and litriture, they do not enjoy physical labour as it something thye do not agree with instead they make machines to do their work for them and they all have time machines(similar to those of doctor whos timelords,though theres are more simple and called the wabac wchich is pronounced way back. they enjoy math and anything intellectual their food consists of normal earthfood minus chocolate as all of the populas is allergic*well all of the adults anyway children can have it until their 13 at which point it becomes a deadly allergen for them) and same applies to alcoholic drinks as well.


    Religion: they observe a form of wiccan religion mixed with Judaism and they call it magickism


    Other: Sherman is their leader also look at my avatar for picture of what the species looks like



    Nation Name: learnatarius


    Species: smart Peabody


    Important Planets: (include both name and description; you may have up to five planets to begin with) they only have one called musbara


    Important People: (there will be a sheet for important people) Sherman their leader


    Approximate Population: (A small-ish nation will have around 5 billion individuals)300 billion


    Ratings: (these are done on a scale of 0 to 100, with 0 being extremely weak to 100 being the most powerful in the galaxy. All except Influence will start between 0 and 10, because we're budding nations, not established giants.) as they don't like to fight 90 they are rather strong but refuse violence as an answer
    Military: rather strong military that is seldom used.
    Economy: mixed(they tell their people what color to make the wabacs they sell other wise they have free range of everything else
    Influence: (you will start with a range between 40 and 60. The lower the rating, the worse your reputation is)50


    History: (focus on what got your civilization into space here) the dogs whom had by now outgrown their dog form of earth built a spaceship to escape the planet earth which they called uninhabitable. they soon found a barren planet and cultivated and produced their civaliztion


    Other:hope these forms are alright yes I know I based it on something but I want to try

  • Nation Name: The Danlesh Empire


    Species: Danglesh


    Important Planets: (include both name and description; you may have up to five planets to begin with) Only one Danglesh a red barren planet with a Methane atmosphere


    Important People: (there will be a sheet for important people) The King Singlor


    Approximate Population: (A small-ish nation will have around 5 billion individuals) 400 million


    Ratings: (these are done on a scale of 0 to 100, with 0 being extremely weak to 100 being the most powerful in the galaxy. All except Influence will start between 0 and 10, because we're budding nations, not established giants.)
    Military:70
    Economy:30
    Influence: 40 (you will start with a range between 40 and 60. The lower the rating, the worse your reputation is)


    History: (focus on what got your civilization into space here)
    What got this nation into space was utilizing the atmosphere to make a fuel for ships and such, though most of the Danglesh people were skeptic they got excited about colonizing other planets and influencing other cultures. Unfortunately they have to face a rebellion on the planet so there progress may be slowed.


    Other: OC Race



    Name: Singlor


    Age: 100


    Gender: Male


    Species: Danglesh


    Nation: The Danglesh Empire


    Position: King


    Other: Cause' Yolo

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Anubis the Reaper ().


  • Interesting race, actually, though I'd like you to try and work on that grammar. I'm not trying to pick on you, but this will be a low-advanced setting (what most call semi-advanced here). The main issue I'm seeing is that you didn't use actual ratings for the military and economy. I need you to rate it from 0 to 10, as I'm not having custom nations start out all that powerful just yet.



    I can't help but picture them looking like the Combine Overseers from Half-Life 2, lol. Anyway, I only want military and economy at a max of 10 for now, but as we go, those ratings will rise or fall based on your interactions with other nations.


  • Sorry I tend to skim XD

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Anubis the Reaper ().

  • Okay, Anubis. You're now approved! It's a very cool race that I think can easily fit into the dark and mature atmosphere of Metroid.


    The RP will start as soon as I get my sheets up. I got a lot of writing ahead of me. XD

  • alright should point out that smart peabodys tend to think themselves smartest being sin the universe so if he acts ob noxious or rather close to godmodding im sorry


  • alright should point out that smart peabodys tend to think themselves smartest being sin the universe so if he acts ob noxious or rather close to godmodding im sorry


    Being obnoxious and arrogant is perfectly fine, but I highly doubt they're smarter than the Chozo, who are the most advanced species in the galaxy.


    @Anubis
    I feel your pain! I've had to type casual-level (which this site calls advanced) posts on a phone a few times. Took me half an hour, lol. I'm just glad I've never had to do an advanced post (which this site calls uber-advanced) on a phone, lol


    Anyway, the GF is done. Now for the Space Pirates!