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/pushes away the topic of pixels because i can't make one to save my life
critique, guys?
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[font=segoe print].:OOC:.
Uhm how to shade ew
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[font=segoe print]I must be dreaming when i'm sitting here,
On someone else's throne....
[font=segoe print].:IC:.
[font=segoe print]Am i sleeping with my eyes wide?
Won't you let me know?[color=#f0dba3].[color=#efdba2].[color=#efdaa0].
[justify][fancypost borderwidth=0px; border-top: 3px double white; width: 400px; line-height: 12px; font-size: 7pt]shh i can't shade like that
all i suggest is that you add shading to the face, too, and add some highlights to show where the light is coming from.
[justify]How do you even shade, I barely can. I'm really terrible at it.
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those are so cute!!!
could i have a critique on this please?
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those are so cute!!!
could i have a critique on this please?
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those are so cute!!!
could i have a critique on this please?
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/pushes away the topic of pixels because i can't make one to save my life
critique, guys?
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Ah so cute!
The only critique I have is there's a bit unwanted like what's the word? Lines around the outside of the cat if that makes sense.
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/pushes away the topic of pixels because i can't make one to save my life
critique, guys?
oh it really cute! i only suggest you make your signature smaller/more transparent.
[justify][fancypost borderwidth=0px; border-top: 3px double white; width: 400px; line-height: 12px; font-size: 7pt]@tele + pum: alright, i'll keep that in mind!
Can someone critique mine please?
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I think it's really good, but if I had to critique it I'd say that the colors could be more blended if you know what I mean? And the ring on the eye could bend more naturally with the shape of the face. Other than that I think it's great!
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[font=segoe print].:OOC:.
[img width=510 height=431]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs7…_by_tidepool8-d7v3hgg.png[/img]
[font=segoe print]I must be dreaming when i'm sitting here,
On someone else's throne....
[font=segoe print].:IC:.
[font=segoe print]Am i sleeping with my eyes wide?
Won't you let me know?[color=#f0dba3].[color=#efdba2].[color=#efdaa0].
Thanks for the critique marpalite!
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[font=segoe print].:OOC:.
[img width=510 height=431]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs7…_by_tidepool8-d7v3hgg.png[/img]
[font=segoe print]I must be dreaming when i'm sitting here,
On someone else's throne....
[font=segoe print].:IC:.
[font=segoe print]Am i sleeping with my eyes wide?
Won't you let me know?[color=#f0dba3].[color=#efdba2].[color=#efdaa0].
Ooh I like it!
My only suggestion would be more shading, especially on the moss and the surrounding snow.
And their expressions are a little hard to read.
Moonstar You're welcome, assuming that was a typo!
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[font=segoe print].:OOC:.
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[font=segoe print]I must be dreaming when i'm sitting here,
On someone else's throne....
[font=segoe print].:IC:.
[font=segoe print]Am i sleeping with my eyes wide?
Won't you let me know?[color=#f0dba3].[color=#efdba2].[color=#efdaa0].
I really like the position theyre in
My one thing to say is that the aproaching cats muzzle looks kinda to long, making it look a bit like a dog
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[font=segoe print].:OOC:.
I don't really want critiques right now
[font=segoe print]I must be dreaming when i'm sitting here,
On someone else's throne....
[font=segoe print].:IC:.
[font=segoe print]Am i sleeping with my eyes wide?
Won't you let me know?[color=#f0dba3].[color=#efdba2].[color=#efdaa0].
(Lol yea sorry harpalyte :P
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did this, i hope it doesn't infringe on any rules!! by the way, that bra-like thing is actually a breast binder that is common among ftm transgenders or non-binaries/agenders, if you didn't know c:
critique please?
Its nice
Now im not one for anthro really.
But one thing i do notice is in some places the lineart is a bit rough.
For example
One of the lines goes into the white of the brest binder
And where the eyelashed connect to the eye is a bit rough
[justify][size=8][color=white]ahhh i know!!
i was trying to fix it but gimp was being a butt :/
it was probably the lock alpha channel tool, i used it and it worked except for that.
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yes hullo- I think I'll stalk this thread now mmkay?