How did I get stuck with you? {Ochre + Minta only}

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    OOC: Hellooooooz


    Aurapaw: Aurapaw sighed dramatically as Arcticpaw sped into yet another wall. He needs either headlights or a brain transplant, she thought amusedly. "So, Mr. Brakes, you gonna stop running into stuff? Cos' that can't be good for your health, ya know." Her eyes twinkled, entertained by Arcticpaw's obvious annoyance.


    Arcticpaw: She was sooooo smug. Could do with taking down a notch, he thought. "It's better than doin' nothing, snail. I don't see you making an effort." His prideful grin was a little bit irritating.

    training. Hey there! :D Ready for some training? First off, you're relying a little much on using italics. ;) Try to ease up a little bit~


    [size=25pt]MOSSPAW.[/size]
    [size=6pt]gather up your tears
    keep 'em in your pocket[/size]

    From the corner of the den, a snow white she-cat watched the antics of the pair with a curious gaze. The relationship between the two siblings was intriguing. It was nothing like what existed between herself and her two siblings. Even as kids, they had played in a reserved fashion and been as polite as possible.


    Mosspaw found herself liking the relationship between Aurapaw and Articpaw more than the relationship between herself and her siblings. It was much more, say, personal. A soft smile grew on her lips.

    OOC: Filing... ;)


    Aurapaw: She opened her mouth to make a snappy retort, but found she couldn't think of anything to say. Ugh... It was then that she noticed the she-cat sitting quietly in a corner of the den. In fact, she looked a lot like herself. It was worth meeting anyone at this point in time, as long as it made her brother shut up, so she padded over to the cat, putting on a friendly smile. "Hi," she greeted her. "I'm Aurapaw."


    Arcticpaw: He whirled round with a dazed expression on his face. "Wha...?" Then he noticed the apprentice Aura was going to meet. "Oh." He darted over to join her, totally demented tom all over. "Hey, I'm Arcticpaw," he said, grinning stupidly.

    training. You've got some funky sentences in that last reply. :) Funky in their grammatical structure. Mostly, this piece - " totally demented tom all over" - caused me to do a double take. I could dredge up grammatical rules for you to follow, but it's easier to tell you to read things like this aloud. People have better grammar when it comes to speaking then writing, as speaking is more instinctual. ;)


    [size=25pt]MOSSPAW.[/size]
    [size=6pt]gather up your tears
    keep 'em in your pocket[/size]

    Before she knew it, Mosspaw found herself confronted by the two of them. Shyly smiling, the apprentice automatically meowed politely, "Hello. I'm Mosspaw." It still seemed strange to her that she'd yet to exchanged pleasantries with all her den mates. Ah well - it was a big Clan. Besides that, the white she-cat was shy. She didn't often start conversations with others, admittedly.


    A silence hung in the air for a long moment. "Uh, how are you?" Awkwardly asked Mosspaw, doing her best to be properly social.