A New Apprentice's Adventure ~ (Open)

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    Bronzefur saw a flash of ground, speeding past. Ground? she wondered for a minute and Redwhisker took over again. She snarled viciously as she tripped. Her lack of control had lead to that.

    Stormflare pressed a paw to her chest."Stop this! Release Bronzefur! I know she's there, she's too strong to just give up!"

    Bronzefur saw through her own eyes but couldn't move. She instantly realized what was happening. Stormflare? she tried to say but couldn't she tried to fight with all her might but it wasn't working.... "Stormflare!" she managed to gasp out before redwhisker took over again.


    Redwhisker realized her daughters soul had been awakened. this was going to be a problem. she took control and tried to lock down on it. She succeeded. She sighed with relief and looked at Stormflare. She knew how to crush souls.


    Bronzefur's limited vision disappeared.

    Stormflare heard her cry. It was Bronzefur."Don't give up Bronzefur, remember your friends and family! Flamekit and Altraclaw and Redkit! Don't leave them behind!" He demanded.

    Redwhisker yowled in surprise at the bite on her leg. She was flinching all over as her daughter aimed to take over. Bronzefur tried to break back in. She gained control over one paw and scratched her self in the face. It was a war against herself. Redwhisker gained it back and dropped to the floor, blood leaking out of them.

    Redwhisker's hatred for Bronzefur took over. She shoved the other mind out of the way until she had total control of it. she flopped to the floor, exhausted with the fight.

    Stormflare stood beside her unsurely. Was this Bronzefur or Redwhisker? He tried to look into her eyes, trying to see the pure gleam that Bronzefur possessed in her eyes, and not the evil look Redwhisker had in hers.

    Redwhisker stood up. She watched stormflare examine her. There was no way to tell who-was-who. She decided to act it out the best she could. She reached into her daughters mind and found what she would have said.
    "Im back, Stormflare." she breathed. She looked exactly like Bronzefur, eyes and all.

    Stormflare stepped toward her uncertainly. He didn't say a word, just standing a mouse length away, his eyes never leaving her.


    ooc: I can't put three pictures in my signature, so I'll just put this here:

    Redwhisker watched herself silently and put her paws and body EXACTLY where bronzefur would of. She knew blazingclaw thought something was up - she would have to prove a lie.
    OOC : HOW do you do that? Like bring a picture to a post? It annoys me to death XD

    "How can you tell?" Stormflare hissed unsurely."Will you hurt her while there's a chance it's Bronzefur?"


    ooc: You do the same thing as you do in your signature [img]

    Redwhisker put on a look of surprise that was pretty authentic. She was surprised he had figured it out. "What?" She asked. "Why would you say that, Blazingclaw? You of all people should know me." she mewed.