Shiverpaw Needs a Mentor!{Closed}

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    Shiverpaw~[img width=510 height=328]http://i.imgur.com/qMvRhu7.jpg[/img]
    Clan:Riverclan.


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    Shiverpaw grinned as she thought of all of the possibilities to who her mentor was.




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  • Name: Abyss
    Gender: male
    Personality: smug and sacrcastic, often very blunt and crude. He has a tendency to harm other's feelings easily.
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    Other: mind If i take the role? i am super bored.... if not, then just delete my post and ignore me.

  • Abyss trotted over and lashed his tail.
    "Come on... don't waste daylight sitting around like a fat kitty pet" he snorted and trudged towards the training area with a scowl plastered onto his face.

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    Despite her mentor's comment,Shiverpaw was still chipper."Yes,Abyss."She mewed obidiently and padded after him,a small bounce in her step.Her ears twitched at the sounds of the forest as they left camp.




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  • Abyss trotted on and enterred the small arena.
    "Get over here and crouch" he growled, his beady eyes glaring out at the dirt gloor of the area.

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    Shiverpaw nodded and went over to where he told her to crouch.She got down into a crouch and waited for her next instruction,her eyes gleaming.




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  • Abyss curled his lips into disgust and walked over, forcing her painfully lower and slamming her tail down.
    "This... low.... the prey would've seen you before you even saw them!" he scoffed and lowered his head.
    "I want you to crawl like that.... don't go any higher then I instructed" he spat.

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    Shiverpaw nodded and did as he instructed,determination shone in her eyes.She kept herself low and kept her tail down.




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  • Watch your paws!" He snapped, pointing out the debris she hadn't avoided.
    "Do you want your prey to know you're coming?! Think about it" he sneered and crouched down, slithering over the debris without a single crackled leaf.
    "Do it quiclly... no mistakes or e start all over again!"

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    The apprentice nodded,starting again,she watched her surroundings and kept her self low. Shiverpaw slithered quickly over the debris,a determined look still glinting in her eye.




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  • "Now.. do this in circles. When I hear a sound... you'll start the lesson over. If I flick my ear... you stop and hold still... mov err or breath heavy and we srart over... got it?" He said bluntly.

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    Shiverpaw nodded,and did as he instructed,being as careful as possible,until she accidentally stood on a dried leaf.The dried leaf let out a loud crackling sound and Shiverpaw blinked.




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  • "Okay..." he groaned and stood up, yanking her over to the original spot and sat her down.
    "Now.... I want you to sit there.... not a single sound... no matter what you do. No sneezing, no twitching..... don't budge a single muscle. Blink very slowly, and don't move one tiny twitch or you'll start over... I'll be timing you" he hissed in her ear and went over, sitting across from her and facing her, a face so cold and unforgiving, sharp and unyielding to the warm fall winds.

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    She nodded,still determined.Shiverpaw sat there,like a statue,not even letting herself move to get the growing itch on her ear.She stared off into the distance for a few moments before blinking slowly.




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  • After a bit, he spoke:
    "Now..... walk in a circle without making a sound.... keep your breathing low and slow, but don't hold it" he murmured, not even blinking as he watched.

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    Shiverpaw Obeyed,and slowly rose to her paws,her breathing gentle and steady.She carefully walked in a cautious circle,careful of the debris on the ground.




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  • "Ah.... your breathing can be heard by me..... lower it... make it as soft and gentle as the whisper of a ghost.... don't stir a single grass blade...." he murmured, his eyes closed and his sides looked as if they weren't moving at all.

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    The breathing of the young apprentice became quieter,and more gentle,by her mentors command.Her cautious steps became more confident every time she took a carefully placed step.




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