WarriorCat Fanfiction- What do you think of it?

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    [justify]"Thank you, Sunstar," Silvernight meowed as she left the den and padded quickly to where Echomist, Cherrypaw and Mudpaw waiting for her at the mountain tunnel. "What to you so long" Mudpaw Harassed. "You don't speak to a mentor like that, Mudpaw, In fact you don't speak like that to any cat, not even you're den mates," Echomist growled. "OK, whatever lets just go!" Mudpaw spat. The two mentors rolled there eyes and sighed as the four of them headed out of the mountain tunnel and past the waterfall, that hide the tunnel to the camp. Outside it was bright and sunny! Cherrypaw and Mudpaw raced ahead towards the rocks![/justify]

    [justify]"Thank you, Sunstar," Silvernight meowed as she left the den and padded quickly to where Echomist, Cherrypaw and Mudpaw waiting for her at the mountain tunnel. "What to you so long" Mudpaw Harassed. "You don't speak to a mentor like that, Mudpaw, In fact you don't speak like that to any cat, not even you're den mates," Echomist growled. "OK, whatever lets just go!" Mudpaw spat. The two mentors rolled there eyes and sighed as the four of them headed out of the mountain tunnel and past the waterfall, that hide the tunnel to the camp. Outside it was bright and sunny! Cherrypaw and Mudpaw raced ahead towards the rocks[/justify]

    hmmm..

    No i didn't thats how his name is spelled

    Lol

    ((Sorry, I'm a bit adhd and want everything to be perfect. It's a habit of mine. Sorry again. :) ))

    (its ok :))

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    Ooc:: Lol XD I was always wondering why you spelt Lighteningstar XD I thought it was actually mis-spelt until I read this XD Now I understand why you named him Lighteningstar, well hopefully anyway XD


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    ^^ Click the eggs or I'll send Nightmare Bunny after you^^
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    lol lol