How is my first, official poem? 33
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I love it! It made me smile. :3 (26) 79%
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It's... Um... Good... (0) 0%
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I'm no Christian, but it's pretty good. (6) 18%
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I hate you. (0) 0%
A poem by me.
Oh Lord, my God, my Savior.
Oh Lord, my God, my Savior,
I thank you with all my might.
For my home, my friends, my family,
For darkness and for light.
You give me food and water and clothes,
And a brain in my head.
But all are sins had killed you.
We had left you dead.
But reality didnt stop you,
You rose and became our king.
But, when you left for heaven,
You left one thing.
Eternal life and happiness.
~ Thank you for reading.
Please do not copy.
If you are not a Christian, I hope you get the message.
Feel free to comment. Thank you.