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  • OOC: Finished it! . . . Kinda . . .

  • username: Cynder drag
    Activity level: 10. 9 sometimes when I have a show.
    Rping rating: 8-10. Depends on the day and how much time I have. Always on the high side though.
    Did you read everything? Of coursies.
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    Name;; Dark (later to become Dark Wings)
    Gender;; Female, of course.
    Age;; about 7 moons
    Rank;; Currently, a Learner
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    Dark is a rather complicated cat to describe, but I shall do my best to explain her (whether it be her description or personality) in the following sections. Because of her complexity, it will be easiest for me to explain her by starting with her history.


    History;; Bright was born right at the end of winter, just when the flower buds and birds would be appearing at the base of the tall mountains. Everything was looking brighter for the Dark Waters Tribe as new kits were born that would soon make their way into Tribe life. Falling Rain and Crumbling Path were eager for their kits to finally be born right at the beginning of spring, but were soon crushed as they realized that their large litter of kits were all still-born, possibly from enduring the hardships of winter. Just as they were about to bury the deceased litter, a small white kit poked her head out of the ashes of the dead, living and breathing as if she had been alive the whole time. Thinking it could only have been a miracle, Falling Rain and Crumbling Path named their only living kit Bright, hoping that she would have a brighter future then her dead siblings. They never told her about the experience of her birth, and she grew up happy and, well, bright.
    As Bright was approaching her 4th moon, she began experiencing horrific nightmares and would wake up screaming. Her parents brushed it off as normal anxiety from the Tribe dealing with a certain predator that had made his home near the Tribe's territory around that time. As the danger got worse, Falling Rain and Crumbling Path were called away to help expel the dangerous enemy. Sadly, while they were facing the danger, Falling Rain and Crumbling Path were killed, and Bright fell into despair. She withdrew from everyone and became very angry and depressed with the world. At her mother and father's burial, an elder told Bright the story of how she had been born, and Bright realized that she was condemned to live a life of horrific events as predicted by the dark omen of her birth. As she grew and approached her sixth moon, alone and without her parents to care for her, her pelt slowly turned from white to grey and finally to pitch black. She began to despise her name, and as she came to her sixth moon Bright decided that her given title no longer expressed who she was. From that day forth the kit would be known as Dark, and in darkness she grew, distanced from the world and living in misery.


    Description(6-9 sentences);;

    As described in the History section above, Dark was born with a stunning white pelt. She also had sparkling crystal blue eyes and it was a wonder that she hadn't been born deaf. As she grew, Dark's white fluffy fur slowly changed to a sleek black pelt; however, her eyes stayed the same crystalline blue and are now the only things that you can distinguish her by in the shadows. Dark is of average size and stature, but is more on the thin side and has longer legs and tail, giving her great balance. Despite her long legs and skinny body, Dark has well-toned muscles and is quite strong, because of all the battle training she has done. She has long dark claws and whiskers, her nose is very small and completely black.


    Personality(7-11 sentences);;When Dark was known as Bright, she was very cheerful and optimistic. However, after the death of her parents, she fell into a deep depression and grew a hatred towards everyone, particularly the Spirits of the Tribe. She shunned the ones who look over the Tribe and accepts that she is destined to be a menace to the clan. When others try to initiate conversation or get close to her, Dark either brushes them off or gets very angry. The black she-cat is very quick to anger and she gets very irritated or emotional at the most unusual or unimportant things. She usually stays very quiet and never socializes with anyone of her own free will, lingering in the background unless spoken to. Since her parents death, Dark hides a secret of low self-esteem, though on the outside she pretends that she doesn't care about other people's opinions. There is a part of Dark that wants to be special and to have a special part in the clan but the depressed she-cat feels that if she rises up to her full potential she shall just endanger the clan. In truth, she has put up a wall. The Learner believes that she, herself, is a bad omen and to let anyone close to her could mean their demise. But inside of Dark, the Bright is still lingering, longing to be free from her troubles and to once again shine through the darkness.
    Kin:
    Mother- Falling Rain
    Father- Crumbling Path
    Siblings (6)- Deceased
    Mate/crush- none.
    Element: Shadow
    Other: I have an idea that we could maybe use in the rping of the clan. Would you like to hear the plot? If not I understand.

  • We have decided not to do the quiz, if you read it you won't be lost when we start, if you haven't.... Well we will be able to tell lol

  • :-[ Ummm, would you like ot hear my idea for Dark. I mean, if you don't like it or don't want to that's ok.

  • OOC Sure Cynder. Sorry I haven't been on a lot. I've been really busy. I'd love to hear your idea though. :)

  • *and Olive :P

  • username: Kenzy.
    Activity level:usually a nine or eight. I have volley ball soft ball and riding practices so mostly on weekends. wensdays are crowded for me.
    Rping rating: Semi advanced
    Did you read everything? yes. why wouldn't I? I love reading!
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    Name (something along the lines of Falling Skies for Clawfighter and mako or lily for learner or newborn) Fallen Silver (Fallen)
    Gender female
    Age 3
    Rank Cat of great healing
    Description(6-9 sentences) Fallen is a silver tortoiseshell she cat with sea colored eyes. she has scars along her back and across her chest. she has medium fur and a long tail that she can use to defend herself in battle. her claws are out for most of the time. she has long whiskers and a her that fits her perfectly. she has a slender build that gets her where she needs to be. on her right ear is a small ring made out of teal colored shell. she is shorter than most cats but is faster than most due to her smaller body.



    Personality(7-11 sentences) Fallen has a firey temper that sometimes she can't control. she can be pleasent sometimes but is . she keeps to herself most of the time unless she is needed. she is kind sometimes and is shy. As an apprentice she was a trouble maker. she was always involved with something. now she tries her hardest to stay away from others. She stays in her den most of the day and is awake in the night. she dosen't mind the rains or getting wet. she loves the cold and the night. when she really dose not want to be spotted or found there's not much you can do. she can vanish easily with out a trace if she wishes.
    Kin:none
    Mate/crush none
    Element: Storms
    History(non optional 9-15 sentences) She was born into thunderclan a many moons ago. she was a quiet kit for the most part but her brothers pushed her outside the den when she was 2 moons old and took her outside of camp. they all raced along the river and were having fun. her brothers lead her to snake rock where the was a bager. the brothers hope she would get eaten for none of them liked her. they told her they is was friendly and wouldn't hurt her. fallen's mother had warned her never to go nere those things or she would get hurt. Fallen desided to take her mother's advice and stay away. the bager turn and attack her two brothers were killed before the patrol could get there.
    When she became a apprentice, was braver and ready for training. she and her friends went to the training hollow with their mentors. when the time of the hunting assessment came all of them were thrilled. they wished each other luck and raced off. Fallen was sent to hunt by the thunderpath. she ran along the path until she smelled something. She followed it until she came appon three shadowclan warriors hunting in their territory. The shadow clan cats turned and saw her. one of them, a big tom named Blackheart grinned and attacked her. even though she was good fighter, She was no match for him. he and his patrol gathered their prey she had hunted and the little they had and dashed off leaving her their. Fallen thought real hard while she layed there in pain. she was no use to the clan now. she would never be. she stood up and limped off into the end of day. almost 9 moons later she wandered into the territory of this tribe and learned the ways of the cat of great healing.

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Kenzy.{Has school} ().

  • Hey girly! Okay, here's the deal. If you can go in and proofread your form, capitalize the first word in each sentence, fix your typos, and turn some of those fragments into complete sentences, you're in. Conditionally. Also, we expect you to try and use proper grammar during the rp. Try capitalizing the things that need to be capitalized, try using commas, and make sure each sentence is an actual sentence. I really want to give you a chance to be part on this thread. Thanks - Olive :)