Roleplay tutoring! For begginer roleplayers! Just come here and have fun :)

My roleplaying school! Make up a cat name and show me your stuff. I'll show you how to improve it!

Bluepaw, who had been grooming herself. Saw Rosepaw and lifted her head up. "Hey!" she mewed cheerily as she ran over to her.

OOC: Are you talking to me, or the cat? Becuase you can confuse people that way, you know. I would do it like this;

Rosepaw jumped up excitedly and looked at Bluepaw. "Hey! Whats new?" she asked with a smile.

You shouldn't copy my roleplay style exactly. Look at how other people roleplay. Some use full paragraphs, others use a few sentences, some color their words, add fonts, change the size, and use fancyposts, some people make it bold when their cat is speaking or italics when its thinking like i just did. I can show you how to do any of this if you want. Just make sure to always spell correctly and use grammar, if you put the parenthesis when its talking (".") then people will know that your cat is talking.

OOC: Let me know. :)

IC: Bluepaw smiled at Rosepaw. "Oh nothing much. Want to go hunting?"

Okay thats a little better -.- Why dont you reread my last post?

did you?

D I G I T A L L Y wrote:

OOC: Let me know. :)

IC: Bluepaw smiled at Rosepaw. "Oh nothing much. Want to go hunting?"

Bluepaw looked at Lilacpaw kindly, "Just about to go hunting, would you like to come?"