It was easier following Nightmare through the snow then it was Dream so Kisa mainly kept her eyes on him as she ran.
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Nightmare stopped as he reached a thick dark forest undeistubed by leafbare. He sliped into the shadows his dark eyes looking for a sign of his sister.
Scythe looked around the snow covered wasteland.
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Kisa followed Nightmare, sniffing the air, trying to find Dream's scent but she couldn't smell scents that well through the cold and snow.
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Forest watched them go, his green-yellow eyes gleaming.
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speckleddirt was all alone shivering the snow around him made his injurys worst from his last fight.he collapsed an layed motionless remembering his mothers soft touch
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ooc;; taking wolf out bringing ice back and Kaya and Scythe out of a little I need them for something else
Ice padded through the snow her fluffy tail dragging behind her. She fluffed up her fur trying to stay warm. Slowly she raised her head and she spotted a motionless shape laying in the snow.
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as speckleddirt got up he looked around wondering how long he was out.then he saw a shdow an saw it go away he struggled to ctach it but was to weak as he looked down to his paws he wimpered.
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Ice padded through the snow towards the shape which had just risen. By the looks of it, it was a cat, a tom.
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Ice: a light grey she cat with dark grey strips, white forepaws, tail tip and chest. Her eyes are pale blue -
Moomlight slowly walk as th chill began going right through her.she looked around and saw a fox den that was abandoned. She courageously walks in and sniffs around. :) It was warm and had plenty of mouse holes ine the dirt floor and walls."ggggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaa" Moomlight looks down at her belly. Right then and there a mouse got the bravery to try to cross her path, she flip it with one swing of her paw and it landed right in her mouth.
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ooc;; hey moomlight, here we have to use past tense all ways not use it then swich to first person
a cold wind ruffled Ice's fur as she padded on her head lowered.
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What do you mean....(iv'e never been good at riteing or spelling)
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ooc;; well past tense is when you talk about same thing that has happened all ready like this:
Scythe padded through the thick snow looking for a sign of prey.
And first person is when you talk about what is happening:
Scythe walks through the snow and scents the air.
sorry if it don't help much Wynn will be able to help more if you don't understand.Ice slowly raised her head her pale eyes shinning in the dim sunlight as she walked.
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ooc;; no no no! you know how you put Moomlight looks down at her belly? well it's meant to be Moomlight looked down at her belly, and She courageously walks in and sniffs around. She courageously walked in and sniffed, or scented, the air
Ice sat down her fluffy grey tail wrapped around her paws. A shiver ran through her body as she sat their in the cold snow of leafbare. O how she missed the warm days of newleaf and the plenty of prey, but that was along time away.
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o ok thank for telling me that . x-x

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ooc: Also, You can't really just put just something in ooc. You gotta put something in ic as well.
ic: Kisa caught up to Nightmare. "How can Dream disappear like that so quickly?" She panted.
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"She has a nack for it," NIghtmare mewed looking over at Kisa. "And if she is somewhere in here she will find Kaya before she needs to."
Kaya and Scythe padded through the forest there dark colored eyes scanning there surrondings. They both stopped at a large clearing where they were to meet Nightmare and Dream. Dream ran as fast as she could but she ended up slamming into Scythe. The black and white she cat hissed at her but Kaya stopped her before a fight could breakout.
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sup
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ooc) now what kind of rping is that... -_-
ic) "Shouldn't we find her more quickly then?" Kisa asked Nightmare.
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CrouchStar continues to trudge through the snowy waste, hoping for any scent of prey. After spending his whole life hurt by other cats, he is not very optimistic when a muscular black cat comes up to him.
"Who are you?" asks CrouchStar
"I am helping you, so you better not complain." replies the black cat as CrouchStar passes out.CrouchStar wakes in what appears to be an underground tunnel.
"wh.....where am i?" i ask, nearly too myself.
"you are in my home, i brouight you here becuase you were just about walking dead.", i turned and realized the source of this voice was the black cat that met me on the snow.
"th.....thank you for saving my." i mutter half-asleep.
"its no problem, now plz, get back to sleep, you must rest." says the black cat softly as i swallow a liquid from the bowl in front of me. I slowly enter a deep sleep.