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  • Okay thanks! My parents are in the military, both of them, so I know how it feels to have a parent deployed.

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    [align=center]{“αccepт мe ғor wнαт ι αм тodαy,
    ooc: My dad was in the Marines. He tries to brainwash us :) }}
    ιc:
    doɴ’т rejecт мe ғor wнαт ι wαѕ yeѕтerdαy.”}

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  • Lol...my parents are in the Air Force

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    [align=center]{“αccepт мe ғor wнαт ι αм тodαy,
    ooc: That's cool. My aunt's in the Coast Guard. I'm headed on the Marines Officer path...or possibly a Jag {military lawyer }}
    ιc:
    doɴ’т rejecт мe ғor wнαт ι wαѕ yeѕтerdαy.”}

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  • My uncle is in the army, my god sister is joining the army ( I think ), my parents Air Force, my cousin wants to be coast gaurd

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    [align=center]{“αccepт мe ғor wнαт ι αм тodαy,
    ooc: We live in Florida, so there's Coast Guard bases and training areas all over here.}}
    ιc:
    doɴ’т rejecт мe ғor wнαт ι wαѕ yeѕтerdαy.”}

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  • I was wondering if I could have some critique on this piece of work?


    btw, the creatures in this story are Wishing cats. They are a cat with wings and powers, a friend of mine made them and I wanted to make a short story including them. White are good, black are bad. The main cats name is Greek for evil one and Thalia's name is a Greek god, her name is 'The Flourishing'

    The post was edited 1 time, last by ❤Holly Leaf❤ ().

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    [align=center]{“αccepт мe ғor wнαт ι αм тodαy,
    ooc: The overall idea for the story was great, as well as as the layout. But, you still had a few missing words. Here's what it would look like with editing.

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    ιc:
    doɴ’т rejecт мe ғor wнαт ι wαѕ yeѕтerdαy.”}

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    [align=center]{“αccepт мe ғor wнαт ι αм тodαy,
    ooc: Alabaster is another word for "white".
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    doɴ’т rejecт мe ғor wнαт ι wαѕ yeѕтerdαy.”}

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  • Ivan is it okay to use something I've already written? Because the book i'm writing is in a made up place. However the Prologue describes it, but with plot development the main focus and not describing the area. Should I just use the Prologue or simply write a separate entry about this already made up place?


    (Sorry I was gone for so long. I was traveling to see relatives. :3)

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    [align=center]{“αccepт мe ғor wнαт ι αм тodαy,
    ooc: Yes of course! As long as it describes the prompt/contest. }}
    ιc:
    doɴ’т rejecт мe ғor wнαт ι wαѕ yeѕтerdαy.”}

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  • If this doesn't fit the prompt, sorry, I had a good time writing this though. :3 Also if it doesn't could I try again with a more descriptive piece?

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    [align=center]{“αccepт мe ғor wнαт ι αм тodαy,
    ooc: Go ahead and post it on the Contest Thread c:}}
    ιc:
    doɴ’т rejecт мe ғor wнαт ι wαѕ yeѕтerdαy.”}

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    [align=center]{“αccepт мe ғor wнαт ι αм тodαy,
    ooc: Yeah :3 }}
    ιc:
    doɴ’т rejecт мe ғor wнαт ι wαѕ yeѕтerdαy.”}

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  • Thanks for the feedback I had a read through and changed it :D Great help

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    S***t's Getting Serious


    [size=14]You better hand over the phone, or so help me, I'll kick your hairy butt all the way to New Jersey! ~Raph
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    Ic:
    {Welcome to the Young Writer's Academy!}
    What would you like me to call you?:Slenderman (joke XD) Raphgirl
    May I have a writing sample?:
    Simple, simple little baby steps were needed to be practiced in order for a one year old child to walk. Bigger steps will soon be made after they have practiced on and on.


    To me, practice was easier said than done. My slender, thin fingers touched my face as I stared at my pale face. My face. It wasn't as beautiful as before. My confidence was already fading. I'm nearly made out of skin and bones, no juicy fat or muscles inside my flesh.


    I'm getting thinner and thinner everyday. I could feel my depression in my heart, pounding loudly, enough for me to feel the stark pain in my chest.


    Cutting my wrists with blades was the best thing to do to try to ease my pain. It seemed to be working, but I do not know how long I can go on like this.


    My friends, they abandoned me, humiliated by being friends with me. My heart couldn't hold it. I do not know how long I would last...
    What level of writing do you think you are on?:
    {Where writing is a pleasure.}


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  • I Love Slenderman please can I call you slendy instead? Please! (My slenderman problem upsets my friends)