Loner she-cat is getting close to Thunderclan borders...will anyone stop her?

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    Venus stalked along side of the twoleg place. She had even watching ThunderClan patrols for days now. But this one was early. Focusing on a thresh in the den by her she nearly was spotted if it wasn't for a twig snapping. She dived down into a holly bush near the fence hoping the scent of catnip in the garden behind her hid her scent. She held her breath as the patrol passed. She could only recognize one of the cats. Snowwisker.




    Snowwhiskers stopped to scent the air. He opened his jaws and caught catnip, a thresh, holly, sage...and possibly another cat. He stood there and eyed the area, his tail lashing out behind him. He padded over to the markers and scented again. kittypet? he thought his whiskers twitching.

    DawnHeart stopped with SnowWhisker and the rest of the patrol. She padded towards the Tom, "What is it, SnowWhisker?" She asked as she parted her jaws. She picked up a scent of kittypet, it was clear that there was one around here.


    Ooc: is it alright if DawnHeart is Deputy?

    Ooc; Of course!!:)


    "The kittypet scent...it's strange." Snowwisker newer to Dawnheart. He didn't know how to explain it.



    Venues eyes widened. She had strayed to close to the border this time. Fox-dung! She scolded herself lashing her tail, causing the bush to tremble. She froze.

    Ooc: its alright :) and DawnHeart is a little bit bossy sometimes, but not all the time hehe and I kinda added a apprentice.


    Ic: DawnHeart mewed in reply, "A kittypet scent is neither strange nor familiar. There is a kittypet on our borders." She turned to the bush when it rustled. Her tail lashed as she watched it go steady. "SnowWhisker, would you like to do the honors?" She meowed keeping an eye on the bush.


    DreamPaw watched with curiosity. This was her first border patrol as an apprentice.

    Ooc; okay cool:) I'm not going to do the fancy font and color until I get on a laptop...so the looks of my posts will vary on what I'm on.


    Snowwisker nodded to Dawnheart. He padded over to the bush. "Come out..." He mewed with grace.


    Venus hesitated. She could scent three cats, minus herself. She slowly slink out on the bush and say down infront of the patrol. "You caught me." She said with a hint of muse in her voice.

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    Ooc; okay cool:) I'm not going to do the fancy font and color until I get on a laptop...so the looks of my posts will vary on what I'm on.


    Snowwisker nodded to Dawnheart. He padded over to the bush. "Come out..." He mewed with grace.


    Venus hesitated. She could scent three cats, minus herself. She slowly slink out on the bush and say down infront of the patrol. "You caught me." She said with a hint of muse in her voice.

    Ooc: okaii :) sorry for the late post


    Ic: DawnHeart was a bit surprised that the kittypet just gave herself up like that. "What is your name," She mewed as she padded just a bit close to the trespasser. "And what are you doing here?"


    DreamPaw stayed further back afraid that the cat would attack. Is this even safe?! she thought with concern. DreamPaw was a shy kind of girl, so she was afraid of most cats she didn't know. She shuffled her paws and watched closely.

    Venus rested her tail across her feet. She was a small, long haired black cat with pale, yellow eyes. "Venus." she mewed, her eyes watching the patrol.


    Snowwhisker twitched his whiskers. "Why are you here kitty-" he started to hiss but was cut off.


    "I am no Kittypet!" Venus hissed lashing her tail.

    DreamPaw jumped back, startled. "What are you then?" She mewed in a tiny innocent voice. "We don't come across Rogues, so you aren't that." She mewed as she trembled.


    DawnHeart rolled her eyes at the frightened apprentice, but with respect she waited for the trespasser to answer the 6 moon old kitten. Out of all the apprentices, she is the only one who is probably frightened from a mosquito! she thought with a flick of her tail as she stood tall.

    Venus purred with laughter. "I'm a Loner." She said. She stood up. "I've been watching your patrols for days...and it seems a lot easier with other cats than being alone..." she admitted.


    Snowwhisker looked at the apprentice, than back at Venus. "You do not wish to attack?" he asked her still a little unsteady.

    DreamPaw leaned in closer to hear if the Loner would attack. "If you don't, maybe the leader of ThunderClan can let you join our clan!" She blurted and looked to her paws with a shy look. "Uh-haha, that's the leaders choice...." She mewed with a tiny voice.


    DawnHeart gave a stern glance at the loner, clearing her throat she spoke, "Listen Venus. I'm am not much of a cat who lets any Loner or Kittypet into the clan. FireStar would do that all the time. I will take you to BrambleStar, and from there on, it is your turn to prove you are worthy to join." She meowed with a dip of her head and a flick of her tail as she began to head back to the camp.


    DreamPaw followed along with her tail high in the air.

    Snowwhisker followed by Dawnheart. "Are you sure about this?" He asked glancing back at the Loner who hesitated. "She gave herself up so easily."


    Venus blinked. She was surprised. "O-okay..." She hesitated.

    DawnHeart turned to SnowWhisker, "If BrambleStar lets her join, she will, if he doesn't, she won't. Besides, if she messes up, who knows what'll happen, and we're already having trouble with foxes." She mewed as she continued to pad on.


    DreamPaw awkwardly padded beside Venus, half wanting her to come, half wanting her to stay. "Oh goodness, as much as it was my idea, this doesn't feel so right..." She mumbled to only herself.

    Venus flicked her tail and scented the air. She hadn't been inside the markers before and she was all ready bewildered. She strained her ears to listen to the quiet sounds. She scented the air and could smell herbs and prey and many other cats.


    Snowwhisker nodded looking back at the loner. "She may be useful..." He mewed. "She doesnt look scared either."

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    Venus flicked her tail and scented the air. She hadn't been inside the markers before and she was all ready bewildered. She strained her ears to listen to the quiet sounds. She scented the air and could smell herbs and prey and many other cats.


    Snowwhisker nodded looking back at the loner. "She may be useful..." He mewed. "She doesnt look scared either."

    DawnHeart mewed with agreement as they turned a corner and padded through the gorse tunnel which led them into the heart of ThunderClan territory. The ThunderClan Camp. She turned to SnowWhusker and gave a quick look at Venus, "Watch her— or better yet, watch them." She looked at the loner and apprentice.


    DreamPaw flashed a smile at DawnHeart then looked at Venus curiously. "Have you ever almost died?"


    DawnHeart padded towards the Leader's den.

    Snowwhisker nodded and sat down by them. "Dreampaw!" He hissed lashing his tail at her question.


    Venus purred with laughter at her question. "Yes, a few tomes to be honest." She than looked at Snowwhisker. "She can ask me anything."

    DawnHeart was speaking briefly with the leader, and after only a minimum of time both mentor and leader were padding towards the loner. She noticed that DreamPaw and Venus seemed to be getting along perfectly, but she wondered what questions DreamPaw had for her.


    DreamPaw sat down and was about to start another question till she heard her mentor calling to her. "Got to go, Venus. I'll talk to,you later!" She mewed and scurried off. With a meow that most cats can here she mewed, "What!? But I need to see what happens with Venus! I sorta brought her here." She was silenced and she mumbled, "Fine!" She set off to clean the elders dens.


    (Who's gonna play leader for just right now?)