A Warriors Cats Story, Please REVIEW and COMMENT!

ShadowClan
Leader: Blackstar-a white tom with black paws
Deputy: Shrewtail- a heavy-set black tomcat
Medicine Cat: Snakestripe- a very tall brown and white tomcat
Medicine Cat Apprentice- Starlingpaw
Warriors:
Ravenpelt- a black tomcat with white paws
Tallfoot- a white tomcat with a dark brown paw
Apprentices:
Starlingpaw-a tortoiseshell she-cat
Queens:
Flamestripe- a ginger she-cat, mother of Falconkit, Streamkit and Dark-kit
Oaktail- a brown she-cat, mother of Sandkit and Willowkit
Kits:
Sandkit-a dark golden tabby she-cat with gray-blue eyes
Willowkit-a golden tabby she-cat with dark eyes
Falconkit-a dark brown tabby tomcat with green eyes
Streamkit-a dark brown mottled tabby she-cat with pale green eyes
Dark-kit-a light brown mottled tabby she-cat with blue eyes

ThunderClan
Leader: Bramblestar-a dark brown tabby tomcat with amber eyes
Deputy: Eagleclaw-a brown tabby with white patches
Medicine Cat: Redfur-a ginger she-cat
Warriors:
Silvertail-a silvery gray tomcat
Lighstream-a pale brown she-cat with black paws
Queens: Birdsong-a pretty gray she-cat, mother of Berrykit

RiverClan
Leader: Mistystar-a gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Deputy: Robinfeather-a pretty white dappled she-cat
Medicine Cat: Brightleaf-a bright gray tomcat
Warriors:
Longfang-a gray tomcat with a long tooth
Snowpelt-a white she-cat

WindClan
Leader: Onestar-a very skinny brown tomcat
Deputy: Thrushfeather-a long-furred gray she-cat
Medicine Cat: Cloudfur-a cream-colored tomcat
Warriors:
Ashcloud-a very dark gray she-cat with a white tail-tip
Blackstripe-a ginger tabby with black tabby stripes

Prologue
In ShadowClan and ThunderClan camp, everything was silent. No cat on either terrain was awake, and nothing, not even the trees, dared break the silence. That is, until a loud shriek came from the nursery, rousing a medicine cat from each Clan-from ShadowClan, it was Snakestripe who answered the call of the queen who had screamed, and in ThunderClan, it was Redfur. The cold, quiet voice of Snakestripe, and the warm, gentle voice
of Redfur both spoke in unison “Push.” Gasping, the two queens did as they were told. It took a while, but the birth was over. The ShadowClan she-cat had given birth to two, healthy kits, while the ThunderClan she-cat gave birth to one.
In the leader’s den of both Clans, the leaders were receiving a prophecy about those very kits. Duskstar came to the ShadowClan leader, Firestar came to ThunderClan’s leader. And yet, they both spoke the exact same words, at the exact same time, in the exact same place.

“In the wake of devastation caused by the poisonous berry off the tree of hope, the sanded star will crash from the sky with the aid of the falcon, and will guide you to a time of peace.”
At the moment the words stopped, both leaders wondered, deep in their own minds, what the prophecy could mean…