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    Write a song and post it! I'll judge it and grade it with a max score of 100. Then you get that much freshkill!

    I really don't know about everyone else, but I won't copy it! How about after I give you the freshkill, you delete the post?

    Like Kids Again:
    I want to be like kids again
    hiding in the dark
    shaking of fear
    for thunder shot the sky
    with your arms tight holding me holding you
    in eachothers arms
    a protective shield around
    for fear of letting go
    is like the fear of sound
    water slowly dripping down
    like sand through a clock
    a sheet over head
    stars fading in the sky
    half asleep yet wide awake awaiting the trumpet call
    ive sworn to myself i wont let this be it
    but the unexpected
    got ahead of us first
    days are spent in torment
    for failure is the worst
    i want to be like kids again
    hiding in the dark
    held tight in eachothers arms
    water slowly dripping down
    like sand through a clock
    half asleep yet wide awake
    awaiting the trumpet call
    thunder shot the sky
    and stars slowly fade
    silly games have gone to waste
    and nursery rhymes dont stick like paste
    laughter pierces through the silence
    like paper and a dart
    words fall through like ash
    like vapor in the wind
    i want to be like kids again
    hiding in the dark
    held tight in eachothers arms
    water slowly dripping down
    like sand through a clock
    half asleep yet wide awake
    awaiting the trumpet call
    thunder shot the sky
    and stars slowly fade
    colors fade to shades of gray
    and music comes alive
    lights flashing all around
    with children playing silly games
    fear of thunder but playing in the dark
    i want to be like kids again
    hiding in the dark
    held tight in eachothers arms
    water slowly dripping down
    like sand through a clock
    half asleep yet wide awake
    awaiting the trumpet call
    thunder shot the sky
    and stars slowly fade
    like kids again like kids again
    safe in eachothers arms

    Ok, so ive changed it up a bit, you can get 100 freshkill for creativity and 50 for just having a song that i can kind of feel and understand! Max score of 150! You can just do half of it for half of the possible points, then the rest later! I warn you, Im harsh!


    Ive read like kids again you can delete it

    Twilight


    [size=8]I watched you sing your song,
    In dawn, in dusk, in eclipse,
    I listened to every word,
    I watched them pass your lips.


    I heard the water, I heard the flames,
    My love was your eternal coal,
    Your song reached my fractured heart,
    And mine will reach your soul.


    In the highest peak and the deepest ocean,
    In the rushing river and the flowing chine,
    You sang your song, you sang your song!
    Yeah, and now I will sing mine!


    'Cause the twilight
    In your eyesight
    Is blazing bright
    Beyond the night!


    I've gotta sing my song,
    Because the dawn is coming soon,
    Your twilight is too strong,
    Blazing like the moon!


    My heart was in your hand,
    I was yours, enchanted, enthralled,
    Your song shook the earth,
    And I came when I was called.


    You pulled my strings like a puppet master,
    I was your puppet forever,
    And now we are, you whispered,
    Alone, alone together.


    In the highest peak and the deepest ocean,
    In the rushing river and the flowing chine,
    You sang your song, you sang your song!
    Yeah, and now I will sing mine!


    'Cause the twilight
    In your eyesight
    Is blazing bright
    Beyond the night!


    I've gotta sing my song,
    Because the dawn is coming soon,
    Your twilight is too strong,
    Blazing like the moon!


    Oh, in twilight, oh, in twilight, blazing like the moon (Oh oh oh)
    I sang my song in twilight, oh, I sang my song (Oh oh oh)
    The starlight shining, glowing, glimmering, oh (Oh oh oh)
    The twilight gleaming, glittering, shimmering, oh! (Oh oh oh)
    My song! In twilight! Your heart in my hand, ooooohhh, your lips on mine, oooohhh, my song, my song, my song, our song!



    'Cause the twilight
    In your eyesight
    Is blazing bright
    Beyond the night!


    I've gotta sing my song,
    Because the dawn is coming soon,
    Your twilight is too strong,
    Blazing like the moon!


    Our song is in the sky forever,
    Our song is eternity,
    Oh, forever, forever and always,
    I will love you and you will love me,
    In twilight...



    This is my song:
    Sunshine in the rain


    Sometimes I wonder whats up with me.
    I'm always the one in last place,
    It seems I am lost in the dark and the rain and I wonder what went wrong.


    Sometimes I look at the stars,
    shining down before me,
    Wondering how it feels to be the same.


    On a sunny day,
    I'm stuck in the rain,
    wanting to be free.


    But then i saw the light,
    and found my way again.
    I feel free,
    Cause I found the sunshine in the rain.
    Cause I found the sunshine in the rain.

    The post was edited 1 time, last by ~♥Sassi♥~ ().

    [align=center][size=7pt]I actually take Japanese songs and make English lyrics for them that rhyme. c


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    [size=7pt] And incase needed, here's the song. I would love to know how I did. <3


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    Wow! These rule!

    Here's one from me:


    Once Upon a Song


    Sometimes on a moonlit night
    I look up at the moon
    I wonder if you look up too
    I wonder if you look up too


    But that was all just once upon a song!
    All the love, all the hate,
    Everything I felt inside for you
    Is once upon a song.


    On a chilly Autumn day
    I see the colorful leaves
    I wonder if you see them too
    I wonder if you see them too


    But that was all once upon a song!
    All the joy, all the pity,
    Everything I felt inside for you
    Is once upon a song!


    And I wonder, oh, I wonder,
    Will it ever be the same?
    Will these feelings ever be real?
    Not just once upon a song?
    Will these feelings ever be real?
    Not just once upon a song?


    On a humid Summer afternoon,
    I spy you across the street
    I wonder if you spy me too
    I wonder if you spy me too


    But that was all just once upon a song!
    All the happiness, all the betrayal,
    Everything I felt inside for you
    Is once upon a song!


    But then I ask, is it?
    Is it all just once upon a song?
    A silly love song that I wrote
    Just to show my glee?
    Maybe, just maybe,
    It isn't once upon a song!


    On a frosty Christmas Eve,
    I give you a card that says "I love you"
    I know that you love me too
    I know that you love me too


    And you say, "That was once upon a song!
    All the love, all the hate,
    Everything I felt inside for you
    Was once upon a song!"


    Then you say, "Is it just once upon a song?
    A silly love song we both wrote
    Just to show our glee?
    Maybe, just maybe,
    It doesn't have to be once upon a song!"


    Then I agree.
    And it was all once upon a happy day!
    All the feeling, all the expression,
    Everything we felt inside
    Was no longer once upon a song

    And:


    Learn From Your Mistakes


    Don't go runnin from the past
    It'll only come back to haunt you
    Don't go crushing people's dreams
    They'll come back and crush yours


    Sometimes things happen
    And you just run away
    But you have to stop running
    You have to stop today
    'Cause you have got to find what it takes
    To learn from your mistakes


    Never go lying to friends
    They'll come and lie to you
    Never be rude or criticize
    People will criticize you


    Sometimes things happen
    And you just run away
    But you have to stop running
    You have to stop today
    'Cause you have got to find what it takes
    To learn from your mistakes


    Always be truthful and kind
    Others will be kind to you
    Always care but never criticize
    Nobody will criticize you


    Sonetimes things happen
    And you just run away
    But you have to stop running
    You have to stop today
    'Cause you have got to find what it takes
    To learn from your mistakes


    (Fading) Learn from your mistakes, learn from your mistakes (repeat)

    Alone (c)

    Walking down a dusty road
    The only road I've ever known
    Yet it seems so unfamilar
    I look into the shadows
    And see my deepest fears
    Why can't I escape this feeling?


    I... I I... just want to feel alive... again


    I'm so alone
    Even my shadow is gone
    I'm so alone
    Every time I turn around
    There's nobody there
    Sometimes I wish someone would
    Be here


    Why doesn't somebody come
    To my rescue?
    Not even the monsters under my bed
    Will come out at dark
    The birds fly no more at dawn
    It's like the Earth
    Could not sustain it's life
    Anymore


    I... I I... just want to feel alive... again


    I'm so alone
    Even my shadow is gone
    I'm so alone
    Every time I turn around
    There's nobody there
    Sometimes I wish someone would
    Be here


    [Whispers]
    Please...
    Come back to me...
    Please...
    [Screams]
    COME BACK TO MEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHH!!


    I'm so alone
    Even my shadow is gone
    I'm so alone
    Every time I turn around
    There's nobody there
    Sometimes I wish someone would
    Be here


    Walking down a dusty road
    The only road I've ever known
    Yet it seems so unfamilar
    I look into the shadows
    And see my deepest fears
    Why can't I escape this feeling?
    I'm so...
    ...alone...

    LOVE-------->
    love doesn’t have a price but pay one anyway because true love you cant know what it is but you can learnnnn by love you can learnnnn by lovvveee how to be mineeeeee. MINE!!! How to be mineeeeee. Ohhhhhhh ohhh I need you to be mine right now holding tighter. You cant know what love is! But you can learn by loving me loving me FOREVER. You can learn You can learn by loving meeee forrreverrrrrrr!! I just need you to be mineeeee!! MINE!! You holding me tighter! Me and you are forever. Just say you are my soul you my youuuuu are mine right im holding tighter I just you to beeeee mineee forreverrrr!!!

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    Chat| Don't have a name for this, or chords, but whatever.


    I thought we were friends
    That you would stick with me 'till the end
    You turned your back on me
    I realize what I dreaded, we're enemies


    Alliances form, hate grows
    Don't interfere, nobody knows
    Watching you, watching me
    Why did you do this to me?


    [Chorus]
    Fight, fight!
    Toss and turn all night
    Why would you turn on me?
    Sing, sing
    Debating in the ring
    Why won't you let it be?


    Bring claws of words
    Bring slashing swords
    Living a nightmare
    You release words without care


    I don't know you
    You ignore me without a clue
    I don't need you
    So why do I want you?


    [Chorus]


    [Bridge]


    Ranting, ravin'
    Cold precipitation
    Watching, waiting
    That's why I sing...


    I thought we were friends
    That you would stick with me
    Till the end....


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    Emo's Song (c)


    [Talking: It sounds like a small girl]
    My name is Emo.
    I'm an Orphan.
    [Panicked]
    There's something wrong with me
    [Distorted/Panicked still]
    I can't stop
    It hurts to do this
    But I can't stop
    Everyone is dead
    And it's all my fault
    [Silence]
    [Evil laugh]
    [whispers evilly]
    Would you like to die?


    [Me: Woman Singing]
    Unwanted
    Unloved
    Orphaned with no home
    Where were you when I needed you?
    A child all alone
    You were supposed to guide me
    through the rights and wrongs in life
    But now who's here to save you?
    No one this time


    [Whispers]
    Becareful of your actions


    [Back to singing]
    Whispers in the dark
    Shadows drawing near
    Where were you all my life
    When I needed you here?
    Now your life hangs in the balance
    as well as all the world
    Because you've unleashed the beast
    on to the Earth


    You are the creator
    Of a monster and a beast
    You can't escape the consequences
    of the actions you've created
    You must face the fear of all you've done
    Leaving me in the cold
    I grew up a terror
    Breaking every bone
    Not every child is a gift
    or a blessing
    an angel
    I was born a DEMON
    a curse you can't undo


    Whispers in the dark
    Shadows drawing near
    Where were you all my life
    When I needed you here?
    Now your life hangs in the balance
    as well as all the world
    Because you've unleashed the beast
    on to the Earth


    [Male Screamo singing]
    I'm sorry
    dear child
    I left you in the woods
    So sorry
    dear child
    I didn't know you would
    Turn into the nightmare everyone fears
    I'm sorry
    dear child
    I should've been there for you
    So sorry
    Dear child
    I promise I can still love you


    [Back to singing]
    Whispers in the dark
    Shadows drawing near
    Where were you all my life
    When I needed you here?
    Now your life hangs in the balance
    as well as all the world
    Because you've unleashed the beast
    on to the Earth


    [Talking: Small girl/ Distorted]
    My story is unclear
    sad and depressing
    but don't worry
    You won't have to hear it


    [Sound of a blade slicing through someone then laughter]


    Emo is a character I have.

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    Blackmailed
    ~~~~~~~~~~~
    My eyes they close again...
    The teenagers they come,
    They say look at that nerdy wimp
    They
    Black black black black blackmailed me.
    You give up the heart, running to sea
    You jump in and feel
    Black black black black blackmailed...
    Ding ding the bells cry,
    The stars look sad,
    A blackmail girl,
    Reaches out a hand,
    She pulls you up,
    No longer
    Black black black black mailed.
    Love can you feel the spark?
    The money is not needed,
    I love you
    I know how you feel
    When I blackmailed
    I really was
    Already
    Black black black blackmailed
    Just don't give up,
    You run home
    Tears dripping down
    And it is a
    Happy ending.